Death Does Become Her- Part 4 The Madness Continues

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

here we see the inter working of craig's mind. although a bit confused at times, he still only want to see his "late" Girlfrind die again and again.

They call me a Serial Killer,

That's what I am,

I kill blonde women,

who kill the heart of men.

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Walking around town,

I look for a sign,

my victims arn't innocence,

they reek of there crime.

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They play there games,

so I play back,

I love there screams,

'cos my heart is black.

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I've killed before,

I'll kill again,

it's the kind of game,

only I can win.

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My heart's been turned,

to a heart of stone,

it's her face I see,

when the night I roam.

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I loved her so,

I gave her my all,

but my heart was killed,

when her with him I saw.

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So with each night,

I roam the streets,

I kill her again,

with each one I meet.

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So you could say,

from her I was born,

and with each death,

each one I morn.

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My life is sick,

that's a fact,

but I'll kill her again,

with each attack.

**

My fingers around,

her cheating throat,

the life from her,

this Strangler will choke.


Submitted: May 29, 2009

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JenDamsel

Aww i love Craig's little stone hard black heart ( say that three times) i knew he must have his good reasons to kill lol Craig is just a little misunderstood :D lol
Great poem S.R.
very dark. the third is still the creepiest
I love your dark side! 8D
~Jenn

Fri, May 29th, 2009 2:28am

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yes the third is but when you are writing about something like this you have to give him time to think wait for part 5 three will have nothing on it lol.

Thu, May 28th, 2009 7:32pm

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Imperfect Perfection

At a risk of sounding just as wacked as 'Craig' I quite like this...
And the fact that a broken heart made him who he is, is really creepy. I must say you are really good at writing horror style poems. :)

(H.S.)

Fri, May 29th, 2009 2:29am

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Thank you Craig is my first Horror character. and I am still learning the way of the dark side lol. thanks againg for reading

Thu, May 28th, 2009 7:34pm

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Gothalicious

I really like this and can understand how he became who he is now. I love your darker side. You should write more

Fri, May 29th, 2009 2:12pm

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I have finished part 5 but just havent been able to post it yet but will be here soon thanks for reading Im glad you like it.

Fri, May 29th, 2009 8:54pm

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rustyfootprints88

awesome very well written really good reading with nice flow :)smiles

Sat, May 30th, 2009 12:31am

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thank you Brian Im glad you stoped by I will be around to read more of your as soon as I get a chance. Any sugestions??

Fri, May 29th, 2009 8:55pm

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Vamplit

Hi SR

This poem is great and you don't seem to be running out of steam either. I'm off to read 5 now.

Mon, June 1st, 2009 9:56pm

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thank you vamplit I really love to read your comments no matter how small or detailed they may be

Mon, June 1st, 2009 4:23pm

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tastetheblood

This guy really is deluded and you show this really well also I like the fact that he kills the blondes because he sees her in every face really nice work

Wed, July 29th, 2009 5:31am

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lol yes he is deluded. the pain of the hear affects the minds eyes

Wed, July 29th, 2009 3:34pm