TRAIN (HINDI)

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my first story in 2015..
i can not tell much about story..
better you should read..

story is in hindi....

Submitted: March 18, 2015

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Submitted: March 18, 2015

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Delhi

Thursday

02:00 PM

Delhi University

 

Neeraj- tum ek bar bat to karke dekho apne ghar par? Tum kaho to main tumhare papa se bat karne aau?

Sonia- nahi neeraj tum please aisa kuch mat karna. Tum nahi jante mere papa ko aur mere yaha to waise hi ye love marriage vagera ko paap mante hai..

Neeraj- sona hum 2 saal se sath hai.. ab main tumhe apna banana chahta hu .. mera ek friend hai bhopal me .. maine us se bat Karli hai .. wo waha humara sara bandhobast kar dega..  main tumhe apni patni banana chahta hu aur agar iske liye mujhe tumhe bhagana pade to main wo bhi karne ko taiyar hu.. tumhare liye main duniya se lad jauga.. aur Sonia ….

Sonia neeraj ki bat ko beech me rokte huye- neeraj please ye bhaagne vagera k bare me mat socho.. mere papa aur mere chacha hum dono ko hi maar denge

Neeraj- tum ghar par bat krogi nhi.. iske alawa aur koi chaara hai? Aur tum itna daro mat.. agar tumhe mujhse pyar hai aur jara bhi mujh par vishwas hai to kal subah mere sath Bhopal chalo.. waha ek nayi zindagi hmara intejar kar rahi hai.

Sonia-  lekin ye possible nahi hai..

Neeraj- yani tumhe mujh par bharosha nahi hai

Sonia- bharosha hai baba par ye sahi raasta nahi hai

Neeraj- tum please zyada sochna band kro.. aur agar tumne mujhse pyar kia hai to tum kal mere sath aarhi ho ..

Sonia- main sham tak tumhe pakka batatai hu..

Neeraj- thik hai.. agar tumne na kaha to main sochuga ke tum mere sth kabhi serious thi hi nhi aur ha kaha to kal ek nayi zindagi humara intejar kar rahi hai..

Sonia- neeraj suno to ..

Neeraj itna kehkr chala jata hai….

(Neeraj as shawar Ali
age- 25)

(Sonia rathore as shraddha Kapoor
age- 23)

 

 

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Morena (M.P)

Asfak bhai zindabad .. asfak bhai zindabad …. Log asfak ko godh me uthakar naare lagate road par se le ja rahe the..

Jaha se le ja rahe the waha ke Log apne ghar ki chatt se ye najara dekh rahe the

Ek ghar ki chatt par teen log khade hokar ye dekh rahe hote hai. Aur bat kar rahe hote hai…

Gillu- dekhe hemant bhaiya .. sala hero bana fir raha hai .. bhaiya agar isne haramipana nahi dikhaya hota to iski jagah aap ya dragon bhaiya hote..

dragon- iske harami pana ki saja to hum ise dekar rahege  gillu

Hemant- tum kahe doge be ? hamre kya hath nhi hai? Kaho to sale ko abhi Chambal ghaat me utar de..( hemant kurte me se katta(revolver) nikal kar bolta hai.

dragon- are ch***a insaan.. ise andar rakhle..sirf josh me rehkar kaam nhi hote hai.. thodi akal bhi chahiye.. jo tumhare pas hai nahi..

Hemant- ka bole be? Aur hemnant,dragon ka collar pakd leta hai..

Tabhi gillu dono ko alag karta hai

Gillu- are yr aap dono ka problem kya hai? Sala kuch bhi kam ho …. aap dono pehle ladne lagte ho. Hemant bhaiya aaj is asfaak ko khusiya manane do kal iske log iski maut ka matam manayege…

(Gillu as pitobash tripathy …….age- 30)
(Dragon as abhishek bacchan…..age- 32)
(Hemant as vidyut jamwal……age- 33)

 

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Same Day

Evening

06:00 PM

(Sonia poore din iske bare me sochti rahi ke use neeraj ki bat manni chahiye ya nahi, neeraj ke liye to mehaj ye ek bhaagna tha par Sonia ke liye ye ek aur galti thi.. ek galti uski badi didi pehle kar chuki thi..

Sonia ki badi didi ka kisi ladke ke sath affair tha. Sonia ki didi ne ye bat apne ghar par batai .. to Sonia ke papa gajanan ne us ladke ko ghar par bulaya  sonia ki didi ko laga ke shayad  papa ladke se milna chahte hai par unhone  us ladke ke hath pair ludwa diye

Aur use khoob dara diya..

Ye manjar Sonia ne bhi dekha…

Iske bad sonia ki didi ek rat usi ladke ke sath bhaag gayi…

Isliye Sonia neeraj k bare me apne ghar par koi bhi bat nahi karna chahti thi , wo is mamle me kaafi dari hui thi.

Halanki uske papa aur maa aaj bhi apni badi beti ko miss karte the. aur ab unke pas sirf Sonia thi.

Gajanan aur poonam ke do ladkia thi.

Badi ladki sinki aur choti Sonia)

 

Sonia ne kal tak ka samay jarur manga tha neeraj se par jis cheej ka faisla wo lena chah rahi thi uske liye ek din kaafi nahi tha…

Ek taraf wo sochti ke neeraj ke bare me apne ghar par bat kare to use uski didi wala scene yad aajata.

Wo bhi neeraj se bahut pyar karti thi aur wo uske alawa aur kisi ke sth apni life spend nahi kar sakti thi..

Kabhi uske dimag me uske parents ki photo chapti to kabhi neeraj ki…

 

 

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AT 06:30 PM

Gillu,dragon aur hemnat chai ki dukan par bethkar cigarette aur chai pee rahe hote hai…

Dragon- hemant ek bat to main tujhe bata du, is se pehle ke asfak kal jakr chunaav ka form bhar aye us se pehle sale ko uda dete hai

Gillu- bilkul thik keh rahe ho dragon bhaiya.. usko udakar hum teeno bhi kahi ud lete hai….

Hemnat- yar dekho ab mujhe chunaav me to jana nahi hai. Chunaav me utarne ka sapna me chor chukka hu. Rahi bat is asfak ki to morena se tab hi jauga jab iske jism ko goliyo se bhar dunga.. kal agar mauka mila to kal hi kam nipta dunga..

Dragon- abe sale agar aise hi sochte rahoge mauka mila.. mauka mila to ghanta nahi kuch kar paoge tum hemant.

Hemant gusse me aakar dragon ka collar pakad leta hai, ajay bhi gusse me aakar hemant ko piche dhakka de deta hai ..

Tabhi beech me gillu aakar – abe salo tumhari dikkat kya hai.. bat bad me shuru hoti hai, tum dono hath paav marna pehle shuru kardete ho.. aise to mujhe lagta hai ke asfak to marega nahi. Tum dono hi ek dusre ko maar doge.. are hum teeno k andar ek hi khoon hai bhaiyo..Main chota hu par tum dono se zyada akal hai , Hemant bhaiya thoda kaabu rakha karo gusse par .. ye gussa asfak ko goli marte waqt kam ayega.

Han dragon bhaiya bolo kya keh rahe ho

dragon- abe main to is bevakoof se ye hi keh raha tha ke mauke ka intejar karoge to kabhi kuch nahi kar paoge.. mauka banao.. aur wo mauka kal hai…

Hemant- humare liye mauka aur asfak ke sathiyo ke liye asfak ki laash ka tohfa…

Hahaha teeno sath me hasne lagte hai….

 

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Udhar neeraj bhi soch raha tha ke Sonia ka answer kya hoga.. us din na to sonia ka koi message aya abhi tak na hi neeraj ne use call ya SMS kia …

Neeraj ne socha use 07:30 par call karuga.

Usne apne Bhopal wale dost se phone karke kaha ke shayad kal hum(neeraj and Sonia) Bhopal aasakte hai.. uske dost ne kaha bhai bindas hokar aao.. Bhopal tumhara hai..

 

Neeraj ko lag raha tha ke Sonia mana kardegi par wo us se itni badi bat kehkar aya tha, aur agar sonia han karke apna ghar baar chor kar uske sath Bhopal jane ko taiyar ho jati to neeraj us par ek aanch bhi nahi aane deta

Ye bat Sonia bhi janti thi..

Halanki neeraj kabhi kabhi aggressive bhi ho jata tha but wo bahut pyar karta tha Sonia ko.. aur other side Sonia bhi bahut pyar karti thi neeraj ko…

Time ho gaya tha Sonia se phone par bat karke uska jawab jaan ne ka..

 

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AT 07:27 PM

[Background music play- baby you know that I miss you…I wanna get with you tonight, but I cant . that’s the issue.. ]

Neeraj,Sonia ko phone karta hai

Neeraj- hello, kaha gayab ho? Koi message nahi. Kaisi ho?

Sonia- main thik hu.. tum kaise ho?

Neeraj- bas tumhare jawab ka intejar kar raha hu.. kya socha tumne?

Sonia- neeraj yr sach me.. main tab se isi bare me soch rahi hu and abhi tak koi decision nahi le paa rahi ho..

Neeraj- yr tum itna soch kyu rahi ho? Tumhe mere sath chalne me kya problem hai? Main tumhara lover hu yar.. kya bharosha nahi hai tumhe mujh par?

Sonia- are baba.. suno to.. mujhe bahut bharosha hai .. but ek hone ka ye rastha thik nahi hai..

Neeraj- to koi aur raasta hai? Apne papa se tum mujhe bat karne nahi de rahi.. ab agar tum mana krdogi kal jaane ke liye to humara rishta tik nahi payega.. koi future nahi rahega yr is rishte ka.. ek bar shadi krlete hai uske bad tumhare parents khud maan jayege ..

Sonia- are par meri baat to suno

Neeraj- nahi mujhe kch nahi sun na … mujhe ek bat batao, kya tumhe bharosha hai na mujh par? Mere sath rehna chahti ho na? sirf ha ya na main jawab do

Sonia- haa. Par?

Neeraj- nahi par var kuch nahi... kal tum aur main nikal rahe hai..

Sonia- mtlb tum manoge nahi na?

Neeraj- tumhare upar hai Sonia sab.. agar tum thodi himmat kar skti ho to batao.. main tumhe 10 min aur deta hu.. 5 min socho and uske bad main tumhe call kruga.. and agar tum ready ho kal mere sath jane ke to call uthathe hi mujhe ek kiss dena .. main smjh jauga tumhara answer yes hai..

Sonia- acha thik hai..

(Phone cut)

Sonia ek bar apne room se bahar jati hai.. mom uski kitchen me hoti hai and uske papa tv par news dekh rahe hote hai. Wo wapis apne room me aakar sochne lagti hai…

After five minutes

Neeraj fir se phone krta hai.. Sonia k hath me hi phone hota hai to dusri ring me hi Sonia phone utha leti hai. Neeraj kuch nahi bolta, Sonia b chup rehti hai…

Kareeb 20 seconds ki chuppi k bad Sonia ek dum se phone par- mwaaahhhhhhh krke bed par gir jati hai

Neeraj khushi se yes kehkar apne bed par gir jata hai…..

(Background music- Girl you know I miss you.. I just wanna kiss you..but I can’t right now.. So kiss me thru the phone. By soulja boy)

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Dusri taraf asfaak jameen par girta hai..

(kaise girta hai ye abhi batata hu)

 

Next morning

 

 Sonia apne college bag me apne do Jodi kapde rakhti hai aur college ke liye nikal padti hai.. aaj woe k bahut bada kadam uthane jar hi hoti hai.. uske gharwalo ko ye pata b nahi hota hai ke aaj sham wo wapis nahi ayegi..

Ghr par sab normal dikha kar wo bus me bethkar college nikal jati hai…

College me use neeraj milta hai.. neeraj use lekar sidha hazrat nizamuddin station le jata hai ..

Kareeb 9 baje par ye log station pahuchte hai..

Bhopal k liye train mangla express wahi platform par khadi hoti hai kyunki wo nizamuddin se banke hi chalti hai..

Neeraj- train 09:20  tak chalegi.. . tum bilkul ghabrao mat.. main hu na tumhare sath

Sonia- yr mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai.. koi mujhe yaha dekh lega to gadbad ho jayegi..

Neeraj- tum phle kuch khalo fir apna muh apne duppate se dhak lena…

Neeraj platform par khade samosa wale se samosa leta hai aur dono khane lagte hai .. neeraj k pas travelling bag hota hai .. jo usne pas me hi rakha hota hai..

 

Dusri taraf….

 

Gillu,hemnat, aur dragon usi dukan par bethe hote hai.. ek bike par hi ye teeno chalte hai..

Dragon- 9:30 par asfaak bahar nikalne jayega .. wo daily purane bazar jata hai subah.. akela hota hai

Hemant- akela ho ya fauz k sath ho.. jab mera kata(revolver) niklega to uski cheeken sunai degi…

( asfaak pehle hemnat aur dragon ka acha dost tha.. teeno ek hi party ke the.. chunav me ladne ki wajah se asfaak ki hemnat se ladai ho gayi,. Aur asfaak ne dragon aur hemnat ko party se nikalwa kar khud chunaav ki ticket leli..)

 

Gillu- hum chaurahe par bike start rakhege.. dragon bhaiya jab uska kaam nipat jaye to aap dono chaurahe par aajana

Hemnat- abe dragon ko kahe bol rahe ho… asfak me ek ek goli hum marege.. tum dono hi chaurahe par khade rehna

Dragon- kyu be.. bandook chalana sirf tumhe hi aata hai kya.. hum aaj use apni bandook kid um dkhayege

Hemnat- acha sale.. to tum hi maar lo use ..hum chal rahe ghar

Gillu- are fir shuru tum dono.. dono hi maar dena na

Hemant- nahi.. hum matlab sirf hum

Dragon- ha bhai tum hi ban lo Amitabh bacchan..

Gillu- chalo bhaiya purane bazar chalte hai.. uska time ho gaya aane ka.

 

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Samosa khane ke bad neeraj ticket lekar aata hai .. Reservation ka to sawal hi nahi tha to wo general dibbe ki do ticket le aata hai…

Tabhi train chalne  ki announcement ho jati hai.. Sonia apni chunni se apna muh bandh rahi hoti hai.. tabhi samne platform par do teen ladke khade hote hai wo use muh bandhte huye dekh lete hai..

Sonia aur neeraj thode bheed bhadaake ke sath mangla express ke general dibbe me chad jate hai…

Sonia apni chunni se apna muh bandh rahi hoti hai.. tabhi samne platform par do teen ladke khade hote hai wo use muh bandhte huye dekh lete hai.

Sonia aur neeraj thode bheed bhadaake ke sath mangla express ke general dibbe me chad jate hai…

Tabhi un ladko me se ek ladka kehta hai- abe ye to pramod bhaiya ki bhatiji lag rhi hai be.. par ye is ladke ke sath kaha ja rahi hai… lagta hai bhaiya ko batana padega…

Udhar train station se dheemi raftar pakad ke nikalne lagi hoti hai.. neeraj aur Sonia ko general dibbe me bhi seat milne me zyada pareshani nahi hui hoti hai, kyunki train yahi se banke chalti hai..

Neeraj ne apna bag seat ke niche adjust krdia hota hai aur wo khud window seat par betha hota hai aur Sonia uske bagal me us se chipak kar bethi hoti hai..

Wo ladka jisne Sonia ko muh bandhte huye dekha tha wo apne kurte ki jeb me se phone nikalta hai aur kisi ko phone krta hai

Dusri ring par hi phone uthta hai to ye ladka bolta hai- pranaam pramod bhaiya, main bittu

Pramod- ha bittu.. batao kaise phone kia

(pramod rathore as aashish vidhyarthi

Age- 46

Gajanan ka chota bhai.

Sonia ka chacha)

Bittu- are bhaiya ek khabar hai

Pramod- kya khabar

Bittu- are bhaiya main yaha station aaya tha apne dost ke sath to yaha apki bhatiji kisi ladke ke sath train me bethkar furrr ho gayi

Pramod (gusse se)- kya bakwas kr rahe ho.. tumhara dimag to thik hai,, subah subah peeli tumne

Bittu- are bhaiya man ki bat nah.. aankhon dkhi bata raha hu.. apka aadmi hu isliye sbse phle apko khabar ki hai. 

Pramod- knsi train me chade the wo dono?

Bittu- mangla express..

Pramod phone kaat deta hai aur dusra phone apne bade bhai ko krta hai

Pramod- bhaiya kaha ho?

Gajanana- factory me hu chotu .. kya hua itna pareshan kyu hai?

Pramod- bhaiya bittu ka abhi phone aaya tha wo keh raha tha ke usne Sonia ko kisi ladke k sath delhi station se bhaagte huye dekha hai

Ye sunkar gajanan ke pairo tale jameer khisak gayi.. unhe behoshi si aane lagi.. jo kaam badi beti ne kia tha wahi aaj choti beti ne b kr dala..

(gajanan rathore as manoj joshi

Age- 55

Sonia ka dad)

(gajanan ki ek choti si boxes banana ki factory thi .. aur unke chote bhai pramod ka property dealing ka business tha…)

Gajanan sidhe ghr gaye.. pramod pehle se ghr aa chuka tha . Sonia ki maa ko ye bat pramod ne phone par bata di thi..

Wo Sonia k kamre me gayi.. jaha uske 3-4 jodi kapde nahi the..

Ye to saaf ho gaya tha ke Sonia bahut bada kadam utha chuki hai..

Gajanan ne apna phone nikala..

Udhar train apni poori raftar se chal rahi hoti hai.. train Faridabad cross kr gayi hoti hai.. time kareeb 10:48 hota hai.. aur train mathura pahuchne wali hoti hai.

Sonia neeraj chup chaap bethe hote hai.. Sonia ne abhi bhi apna muh bandh rakha hota hai.. sirf uski aankhen dikh rahi hoti hai. Aur Sonia ne apne dono hatho se neeraj ki right biceps ko pakda hota hai.. khidki se achi hawa lag rahi hoti hai..  Sonia ko bahut guilt feel ho raha hota hai apne parents ke liye par wo neeraj k chehre ko dekhti hai to use lagta hai neeraj kitna khush hai.. aur vakai me neeraj bahut khush hota hai.

[Background music play-  Dil to hai ek raahi jana

Dil ki tum manzil ho

Dil to hai ek kashti jana

Jiska tum saahil ho

Dil na fir kuch mange jana

Tum agar haasil ho]

 

Tabhi Sonia ka phone bajta hai…

Sonia phone nikalti hai to uske dad ka phone hota hai..

Neeraj kehta hai abhi mat uthao phone.. abhi switch off krdo.. Bhopal pahuchkr main khud call kruga unhe aur ye kehkr wo khud Sonia k hath se phone lekr phone kaatkr swtich off krdeta hai..

Sonia- are ye kya kar rhe ho..

Neeraj uski aankho me dekhkr bharosha hai na mujh par . chalo ab ye naqaab kholo aur apna sundar chehra dikhao..

Sonia chehre par se chunni hata deti hai.. to jo unke just samne wali seat par ek 63 saal ka Buddha betha hota hai.. wo Sonia k khoobsurat chehre ko dkhte hi reh jata hai.. use pata hi nahi hota ke itni sundar ladki ek ghante se uske samne bethi hoti hai…

 

Udhar gajanan gusse se – mera phone kaat diya.. ye ladki meri jaan le legi… humare bacche to shyd hume maarne ke liye hi paida huye hai

Poonam- aap please shant ho jaiye.. apki tabiyat khrb ho jayegi.. pramod bhaiya hai na.. kuch nahi hoga.

(poonam rathore as rasika joshi

Age- 52

Sonia ki maa

Gajanan ki patni)

Pramod gajanan ko paani ka glass pakdata hai.. aur khud apne phone se Sonia ko call krta hai.. lekin number band jata hai..

Gajanan- chotu ab hume police station jane me der nahi karni chahiye

Pramod- bhaiya wo mangla express se gayi hai na .. ek aur rasta hai. Sonia ko wapis lane ka

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Udhar, gillu, hemant aur dragon teeno purane bazar pahuch jate hai  aur hemnat gillu se kehta hai- gillu tum dragon ko lekar jao aur chaurahe par khade milo..

Gillu gaadi ghumata hai aur dragon uske piche beth jata hai dono chaurahe par chal dete hai..

Hemant wahi ek dukan par bethkr newspaper padhne lagta hai.. newspaper me bhi askaaf ki hi photo nikalti hoti hai..

Udhar dragon gaadi rukwata hai aur gillu se kehta hai- gillu tu ja chaurahe par main abhi aata hu

Gillu- par bhaiya ab aap kaha chale

Dragon- are sale tujhe bola na .. tu chaurahe par ja aur kuch b dikkat ho to apna katta(revolver) chalane me zyada der na kriyo..

Gillu chala jata hai bike lekar..

Dragon bhi bhaag kar hemant ki taraf aajata hai.. hemant use dekhkr- abe tum yaha kyu aagye be? Tumhe to gillu ke sath bheja tha

Dragon- han to? Tumhare naukar hai kya hum?

Hemnat-abe tum satke huye ho kya? Sala koi bat bheje me jati hai ya nahi?

Itne me dragon ko samne se askaaf aate dikhata hai.. to wo apne kurte me se katta nikalta hai .. hemnat ko lagta hai ke wo use maar raha hota hai.. hemnat dar k mare thoda door hat jata hai..

Par dragon katta nikal kar sidha fire asfaak ke dil par karta hai..

(upar maine bola tha asfaak jameen par girta hai.. wo yahi scene tha)

Goli khaakr asfaak jameen par gir jata hai..

Hemnat mudkar dkhta hai.. aur gusse me dragon se kehta hai- abe sale ye tune kya kia.. maine kaha tha na main maaruga ise

Dragon- maarna mujhe tha.. ab ye tera sikar hai..  jitni golia marni hai maar sale me.. aur bhaag kar chaurahe par aaja… (aur dragon chaurahe ki taraf bhaagne lagta hai

Goli ki aawaj se poore bazar me bhagdad si mach jati hai.. hemnat asfaak k pas jata hai aur apna katta nikalkr dana dana goliya marta hai…

Aur jab uski revolver khali ho jati hai tab wo waha se chaurahe ki taraf bhaagta hai..

Itne me askaaf ke log aajate hai par tb tk dragon aur hemant waha se gayab ho jate hai..baazar wale unhe bata dete hai ke ye kaam dragon aur hemant ne kia hai…

Udhar gillu chaurahe par bike par betha hota hai.. wo dekhta hai samnse se dragon bhaag kar aaraha hota hai aur uske thoda piche hemant bhi bhaagkar aaraha hota hai..

Unhe dekhkr wo kick maarne lagta hai par bike start nahi hoti hai..

Dragon- abe isme petrol hai bhi ya nahi? Marwayega be tu

Tab tk hemant bhi waha pahuch jata hai.. aur kehta hai tum dono yahi is murde me ungli karte raho main nikal raha hu yaha se

Aur chauraha paar krne lagta hai

Hemant ke piche dragon aur gillu bhi bhaagne lagte hai..

Udhar train Mathura cross kar gayi hoti hai.. samne wala buddha lagatar sonia ko dekhe ja raha hota hai.. neeraj use aankh dikha raha hota hai tab wo apni najre hata leta hai.. par jab samne itni khoobsurat cheej ho to zyada der aankhen door nahi reh sakti ..

Time kareeb 12:00 baje ka hota hai.. dhoop poori tarah se kheeli hoti hai.. aur train agle 20 min me apne next station agra cantt pahuchne wali hoti hai..

Sonia aur neeraj ki taraf ki seat bilkul bhar chuki hoti hai..

Udhar gajanan aur pramod aur poonam taxi krke mangla express k route par nikal gaye hote hai..

Gajanan- knsa rasta hai chotu? Tu kya kar raha hai.. hume police me jana chahiye

Pramod- bhaiya aap pareshan mat ho.. Police jo kam karegi .. us kaam ko krne wale mere pas tagde bande hai jo Sonia ko dhund lenge ..

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Udhar wo teeno (dragon,hemnat,gillu) bhaagkar market se bahar aagye hote hai. Aur auto ke pas jate hai

[Background music- deem deem tana from the movie shor in the city]

Dragon auto wale se- chal jaldi start kar..  aur auto me beth jata hai uske piche gillu beth jata hai

Auto wala- are are.. par jana kaha hai

Hemnat bahar khade huye- station

Auto wala- are par mujhe nahi jana waha

Hemnat uske gaal par thappad deta hai aur kehta hai- tujhse kon chalne ko keh raha hai. Tu nahi tto auto to jayega hi aur apna katta nikal leta hai

Auto wala (darkar)- are sahib ye kya dadagiri hai

Dragon- abe dar mat khaali bandook hai iski.. is par nahi chalani aati hai bandook

Hemnat- acha sale .. abhi marke dikhaye .. ( aur hemnat katta auto wale ke maathe par laga deta hai)

Auto wale ki fat jati hai.. aur wo hath jodkar- are bhaiya maaf karo.. chalo station.. mujhe paise b nahi chahiye

Hemnat- abe tujhe paise dega kon.. tu piche beth .. hum station tak chala kar leke jayege..

Auto wala darkar piche gillu ke bagal me beth jata hai..

Hemnat aage seat par bethke auto start krke chalne lagta hai…

 

Train udhar agra cross kr gayi hoti hai aur apne next station morena ki taraf badh rahi hoti hai..

Sonia ki aankh lag gayi hoti hai aur ab Sonia window side hoti hai aur uske bagal me neeraj betha hota hai wo neeraj k kandhe par sar rakhkar so rahi hoti hai… tabhi unki taraf ek baccha aawaj karte huye aata hai- ‘are mar gaya seth aur gir gaya rate.. 10 ke lo..’

Wo chane bechne wala hota hai.. neeraj us se chane leta hai aur Sonia ko jagakar dono milke chane khate hai… samne wala Buddha Sonia ko chane khate dekh khud bhi chane kharid leta hai.. aur Sonia ko dekhne lagta hai..

Udhar, wo teeno station pahuch gaye hote hai… aur gilllu jake aane wali gaadi ki 3 ticket leleta hai…

Kareeb aadhe ghante bad mangla express ane wali hoti hai..

Udhar gajanan aur pramod aur poonam taxi krke mangla express k route par nikal gaye hote hai..

Gajanan- knsa rasta hai chotu? Tu kya kar raha hai.. hume police me jana chahiye

Pramod- bhaiya aap pareshan mat ho.. Police jo kam karegi .. us kaam ko krne wale mere pas tagde bande hai jo Sonia ko dhund lenge ..

(aur pramod apni jeb se phone nikalkar phone list me jake ek number dial krta hai ..idhar station par wo teeno ek bench par bethe hote h tbhi darogn ka phone bajta hai..

Dragon- are ye to pramod bhaiya ka phone aaraha hai.

Hemnat- ab kise marna hai ?

Dragon phone uthakar- bhaiya ki jai ho..

Pramod- tere se ek bahut jruri kam hai dragon

Dragon- are bhaiya hum to smjh hi gaye the apka phone dekhkr.. bataiye kise tapkana hai.

Pramod- meri bhatiji kisi ladke k sath bhaag gayi hai.. mangla express me .. to tu sidha station pahuch aur mangla express pakad .. main tujhe apni bhatiji ki photo bhejta hu, use dhundkar jo uske sath ladka ho use tod diyo .. hum piche piche aarahe hai.

Dragon- Sarkar, kismat ka khel to dekho main station par hi hu. Aane do gaadi ko apki bhatiji ko nahi bhaagne dunga main..

(is bat par piche se gillu bolta hai- main nahi hum)

Dragon- han matlab kahi nahi bhaagne denge hum.. par mera phone multimedia nahi hai .. aap gillu ka number lo us par apki bhatiji ki photo bhejo.. kaam hone par main apko phone krta hu,,

(aur dragon pramod ko gillu ka number dedeta hai.. kareeb ek minute bad gillu ke phone par ek message aata hai aur us me Sonia ki pic aati hai)

Gillu pic ko dekhkar- bhaiya ye ladki to mast hai.. mujhe to pyar ho gaya is se. jo ladka iske sath hoga use to main maaruga

Hemnat- abe chup be .. jo kam hai sirf wo hi karna hai.. aur ye ladki ke chakkar me na pado tum bacche.. inka koi bharosha nahi.

Ajay- abe tum chup raho be.. tujhe pasnd hai na gillu ye.. chal main setting krwauga teri..

Hemnat ajay ki taraf haste huye kehta hai- ch***A..

Background music play- (kash ke yu ho jaye … neend meri khul jaye aur koi kehde humse ishq na tha… jo main jaanti ke preet kare dukh hoye)

Train ab morena pahuchne wali hoti hai.. Sonia window seat par hoti hai and neeraj washroom gaya hota hai.. to samne betha Buddha mauke ka faayda uthakar apna pair Sonia ke pair se touch krne ki kosish krta hai .. Sonia apne pair door kr leti hai tb tak neeraj aajata hai to wo Buddha apna pair hata leta hai……

Muraina junction
(yaatrigan kripya dhyan de nizamuddin se chalakr Bhopal jane wali train nuber ********* mangla express kuch hi samay me platform number 1 par aane wali hai…)

Ye annoucment sunkar platform 2 par khade gillu,hemnat aur dragon patri par se hi platform 1 par pahuch jate hai…
train aati hai aur bheed general k dhibbe me chadne lagti hai..
ye teeno bhi chad jate hai… aur Sonia ko dhundne lagte hai…
dibbe poori tarah se bhare hote hai.. dhakka mukki krke ye andar ghuste hai. Aur Sonia wale dibbe me pahuch jate hai..
aur gillu sonia ko dekh leta hai ab gillu wahi samne khada ho jata hai. Dragon samne darwaje par khada ho jata hai aur hemant bhi darawaje k pas..
gillu Sonia ko dekh raha hota hai aur neeraj gillu ko. Jis seat par samne wala Buddha betha hota hai.. wo seat jaha khatam ho rahi hoti hai just wahi gillu khada hota hai. Aur uske bagal me train ka darbaja hota hai waha par dragon aur darwaje k just bagal me hemant khada hota hai..
train seeti marke chalne lagti hai.. aur tabhi dragon ka phone bajta hai…
dragon- ha bhaiya.. chad gaye hai train me..
pramod- Sonia dikhi?

Dragon- ha.. thik samne hi hai..
pramod- suno hum agra pahuch gaye hai.. use bilkul pata nahi chalna chahiye ke tum uska picha kr rahe ho.. ek kam kro.. uske sath jo ladka hai use tapka do. Par Sonia ko kuch na ho..
dragon- bhaiya bheed to bahut hai train me..
chalo Jhansi aane tak main nipta deta hu mamla…
 

Ab wo samne wala Buddha neeraj k samne hi harkat dene lagta. Apna per Sonia k per se touch karne lgta hai. Neeraj dekh leta hai.
Neeraj us buddhe se kehta hai- baba jara thik se betho..
wo Buddha gaav ka hota hai wo kehta hai- lallu main to aise hi bethta hu.
neeraj samjh jata hai ke Buddha gawar hai.. aur wo Sonia k dono per upar seat par rakhwa deta hai.
gillu samne khada hua ye sab dekh raha hota hai… aur wo uske bagal me khade hemant se kehta hai- bhaiya ye ladki mujhe chahiye. Is se mujhe pyaar hone laga hai.
hemant- abe tum pagal ho gaye ho.. inka kabhi bharosha nahi karo..
tabhi dragon beech me bol padta hai- are gillu tu iski bat mat sun.. kabhi patai isne ladkiya.. tu chance maar.. baki main dekh lunga..
hemnat- gillu tu khud soch jis baap se janam lia .. jab us baap ko hi chorke bhaag rahi hai to aisi ladki ka tu kya bharosha karega…
(teeNO chup ho jate hai is bat par)

 

Train chalti rehti hai.. thodi der bad wo Buddha uthkar toilet ki taraf jata hai to uski jagah par gillu beth jata hai..  aur samne neeraj aur Sonia ko dekhne lagta hai
wo Buddha kareeb 2 minute bad apni dhoti sahi karte huye aata hai..
aur gillu ko apni seat par betha dekh kehta hai- lallu yaha main betho hu.. je meri seat hai..
gillu(dragon ki taraf hath karke)- ja samne bat kar..
Buddha- ka saamne? Main betho hu yaha.. uth
itne me piche se dragon ki aawaj aati hai- are o chacha… kahe garam ho rahe ho..idhar aao ..
Buddha mudke dragon ki taraf dekhta hai fir wapis gillu ki taraf dekhte huye (thodi tej awaj me)- dekh lallu chup chaap uth ja.. verna..
itne me piche se hemnat us buddhe ki gardan pakadta hai aur kehta hai verna kya?
Sonia aur neeraj ye sab najara dekh rahe hote hai..
gillu khada hota hai aur us buddhe se kehta hai- ha verna?
Buddha gusse me aake apna hath gillu ko maarne k liye uthata hai par uska hath hawa me hi ruk jata hai kyuki piche se hemant uska hath pakad leta hai..
aur wo dono us buddhe ko dragon ki taraf dhakka de dete hai… aur dragon use train k darwaje k pas lejakr bahar fek deta hai.
neeraj, Sonia aur us seat k baaki log ye dekhne apni apni seat ko chorke gate k pas aajate hai.
dragon k wapis mudte hi sab log apni apni seat par turant beth jate hai..
 

Train k us dibbe me ek dum se shanti si chaa jati hai… sab log in teeno (gillu,dragon aur hemant) se darne se lagte hai..
Jhansi aane wala hota hai… tabhi ek aadmi samne se jata hai aur hemnat raste me khada hota hai us se takra jata hai…
wo sorry kehkar aage jata hai… darwaje par dragon khada hota hai.. wo aadmi use dekhkr aage jata hai aur andar se hi dusre dibbe me nikalkar apni jebh se phone nikalkar phone krta hai..
udhar darwaje par dragon ka phone bajta hai wo pramod ka phone hota hai..
dragon- jee bhaiya
pramod- kya hua? Niptaya ladke ko?
dragon- bas wo hi karne ja rahe hai.. Jhansi aane wala hai..
pramod- hum bhi Gwalior se aage nikal gaye hai… Jhansi se aage ye mamla badhna nahi chahiye. Hum sidha Jhansi junction aate hai..
dragon- jee bhaiya.. agla phone londe ko niptane k bad kruga…
phone cut…

dragon, hemant aur gillu ko bulata h aur kuch bat krte hai…
train slow hone lagti hai… qki Jhansi aane wala hota hai..
aur hemnat neeraj k pas jata hai
aur neeraj se kehta hai- chal be khada ho…
neeraj- kyu? Kya hua? Aap kon ho?
hemnat (gusse me)- abe tujhe khade hone ko bola hai na..
piche se gillu – abe khade ho ja chup chap
Sonia ye sab dekhkar ghabra jati hai aur wo hemnat se kehti hai- kya hua bhaiya?
hemnat- sssshh .. tujhe bat nahi ho rahi.. aur neeraj ki taraf dekhkar. Kyu be tujhe sunai nahi diya khade ho aur neeraj ka color pkakd kr khada krdeta hai..
Sonia ye dekhkr dar jati hai aur rote huye puchti hai – bhaiya batao to kya hua? Kon ho aap?
neeraj- bhai tum kon ho? Hua kya hai?
Dragon- kaha bhagakar le ja raha hai ladki ko?

Ye sunkar neeraj aur Sonia shocked ho jate hai..
gillu- are hemnat bhaiya Jhansi aane wala hai .. is ladke ka kaand kardo.. Dialogue baazi me mat time barbaad karo..
aur hemnat kamar par se revolver nikal leta hai..
Sonia bahut dar jati hai.
gillu (Sonia se)- na, na . tum mat daro.. tumhe kch nahi hoga aur na hi main tumnhe kch hone dunga.. aur hasne lagta hai..
hemnat sidhi revolver neeraj k maathe par rakh deta hai
Sonia- ye kya kar rahe ho aap.. plz mat kro .. main is se pyar karti hu.. kya galti hui hai humse..
udhar Jhansi junction aagya hota hai aur train slow hote huye chal rahi hoti hai.. platform par log khade hote hai aur train k rukne ka intejar kr rahe hote hai..
hemnat jaise hi trigger dabane wala hota hai .. so hi samne wali khidki se ek goli aake hemnat k hath me lagti hai aur uski revolver hath se gir jati hai…

inspector dutta as Jackie Shroff

(ye goli inspector dutta ki bandook se nikli thi, inspector dutta ko inhi teeno ki talash thi, inki report darj thi asfak ko marne ki aur 3-4 aur crime cases ki.. inspector dutta ko ye kaise malum pada ke ye is train me hai… iske liye thoda upar chalte hai…)
jab ek aadmi hemnat se takraya tha….
(Jhansi aane wala hota hai… tabhi ek aadmi samne se jata hai aur hemnat raste me khada hota hai us se takra jata hai…
wo sorry kehkar aage jata hai… darwaje par dragon khada hota hai.. wo aadmi use dekhkr aage jata hai aur andar se hi dusre dibbe me nikalkar apni jebh se phone nikalkar phone krta hai..
wo phone inspector dutta ko hi karta hai.. wo uska khabri hota hai aur wo inspector dutta ko bata deta hai ke ye teeno is train me hai)

inspector dutta dibbe me jake in teeno aur Sonia aur neeraj ko bhi pakad ke Jhansi station ki hi police chauki me le jate hai..
inspector dutta (neeraj se)- kaha ja raha hai is ladki ko lekr ? bhaga kar le ja raha hai?
neeraj Sonia, inspector ki table k samne kursi par bethe hote hai.. aur bagal me wo teeno khade hote hai..
dutta (Sonia se)- aur madam aap bhi bhaagi chali ja rahi ho.. apne father ka number batao..
neeraj sir aap meri bat suniye- sir ye aur main ek dusre se bahut pyar karte hai.. hum bhaagna nahi chahte par ye hmari majburi hai.. kyunki isme parents kabhi hmari shadi k liye raaji nahi hote..
dutta- tune bat ki iske maa baap se..
neeraj- nahi.. bat to nahi ki kabhi par unka jawab mujhe malum hai.
dutta- madam aap apne father ka nuber batao…
itne me hi us station me Sonia ke mom, dad aajate hai aur chacha dragon ki shakal dekhkr andar nahi jata, bahar se hi nikal leta hai..

gajanan naraj to hote hai apni beti se par use dekhkr khush ho jate hai..
Sonia bhi roti hui unse milti hai…

dutta sabko bethakar bath krta hai..
aur smjhata hai pehle gajanan ko- bhai shahab apko apni ladki ko smjhna chahiye.. ye uski zindagi hai. Agr usne kisi ko chuna hai to kam se kame k bar to apko uski pasnd ke ladke se milna chahiye…
aur neeraj tumne bhi ye bahut galat kia, tumhe itna bada kadam uthane se pehle ek bar Sonia k maa baap k bare me socha chahiye tha aur ek bar bat karke dekhte…
ab aap sab aapas me dekho.. ek dusre ko smjhne ki kosish kro...
aur Sonia neeraj aur uski family station se nikal jati hai..

dutta- ha ab tum teeno batao.. kya kia jaye..
dragon- are Sarkar.. hum to aap hi ke sevak hai..
dutta- ha mera hawalat bhi tumhara intejar kr raha hai.. pehle 6 mahine ki hawa khao hawalat ki.. fir mulaqat karege..
aur wo in teeno ko ek hi jail me band krdeta hai..
dutta- ek hi jail me isliye dala hai taki tum teeno ke manoranjan me koi kami na ho..
dutta mudkar jata hai
tabhi piche se gillu- are sirji ek bat ka solution chahiye apse..
dutta- bol
gillu- are sir wo jo ladki thin a Sonia.. wo mere dil me utar gayi. Ab main kya kru?
dutta- ab tu gaana gaa- meri kismat me tu nahi shyd, main tera intejar karta hu…
aur dutta mudkar chale jata hai..

is bat par piche se dragon aur hemant hasne lagte hai……

 

(Background music play- meri kismat me tu nahi shayad.. from the movie prem rog)





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