First Love

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

My first ever poem that I wrote, I remember it was hard to find words to describe what I was feeling back then (high school) and it was very intense feeling too and to be honest it was written
because of someone who made me felt that way and it caught me unexpectedly. So I want to thank him by writing a poem about him and those emotions and for giving me the chance to expressed those
emotions through poetry.

First Love

I never once was struck before that very hour, with love so sudden  and so strong,

I felt my heart blows.

His face, his eyes it harms my way.

He stole my heart from that very day.

That moment I knew I wish I could refused;

my face turned to pink  and my feet refused.

When he looked my way, I looked away so he won't see my red face.

the trees, the flowers round the place.

As I look again my blood rushed to my face and

right then and there he took my breath away.

It seems like sunset on a Tuesday mornng,

I couldn't hear anything or even knew where I was going.

Words from my mouth failed to start as I question who was he?


Floweres seem to be blooming in winter and left spring for another day,

until sun shimmers above my head, and so as autumn with its brown leaves.

That day August eighteen that I first saw you, you swept my heart.

I hope you hear this silent voice that I long for you,

The heart you took away will never erase,

even if this heart will may never return to its dwelling place.



Submitted: December 22, 2017

© Copyright 2021 Suzanne Cruz-Garcia. All rights reserved.

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