Lost Romance

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Damnit Dyllan...


I thought I understood heartbreak

But then you left me

I cry every night

And scream into the dark sky

I wish and pray on the stars

To take this pain away

But no

It will always remain

Here

In my heart

Because this romance of ours

Is lost

Just a lost romance


Submitted: November 19, 2015

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J. Edgar Cooper

This is some really powerful stuff Suzonne and I can’t even begin to imagine the heartache and pain that you’re going through after such a break-up. It wouldn’t be fair of me to say that I know what being left by the one who is supposed to love you feels like, as I’ve never really been in a relationship… But from your piece, it doesn’t sound like a very nice thing to have to go through at all and I’m sorry that you had to go through it yourself. The fact that you say ‘You cry every night and scream into the dark sky, wishing and praying on the stars to take the pain away.’ I really do empathise with you Suzonne and I hope that you can find some solace, to maybe alleviate the pain that you do feel. I hope that you don’t have to go through something like that again Suzonne. You seem a nice girl and you deserve someone who will treat you well and be kind to you and support you whenever you need it. Take great care and all the very best to you.

Sun, November 22nd, 2015 2:06pm

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Thank you James.

Sun, November 22nd, 2015 10:57am

Christopher Kush

It's such a visceral and cruel pain. You have to go through it to truly understand it's impact; people will say they understand, but if they themselves have not experienced the gut-wrenching agony of the separation from a true love they can never understand.

Tue, January 19th, 2016 5:14pm

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Absolutely! Thank you for taking the time to read this!

Tue, January 19th, 2016 9:28am

LeParadisNoirPoetique

In a lost romance you have describe the emotions that follow, and I find a short length on subject like this gives it more power. You point on the romance being the problem, because love cannot succeed if it failed. Kudos for sticking to a length which makes it more powerful. Well written!

Tue, January 26th, 2016 5:03pm

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Thank you so much!

Tue, January 26th, 2016 10:18am

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