My Lovely "Brother"

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is about my brother.

If I could wake up to see your face 

It would be such a disgrace 

You were a mistake 

Worse than a snake 

You tore my heart to pieces, Dear 

Now you're my eternal fear 

My one and only, my hero 

You sir are why my thoughts are a zero 

You left me on the street 

Now I see it was a treat 

You left me in the rain 

But there goes all my pain


Submitted: March 18, 2015

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BlackNWhite

I guess you could say that I'm going through "this state of mind" ^^^ It's hatred that I feel/

Mon, May 18th, 2015 11:58pm

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Completely.

Mon, May 18th, 2015 6:39pm

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Evie Wake

Honestly, I haven't gone through very much of what your going through, but I still totally get it.

Fri, July 24th, 2015 8:56pm

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Thank you for reading! Everything about him is hard to write, so it means a lot that you took the time to read it and comment on it!

Sat, July 25th, 2015 9:25am

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