World be a better place

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

a poem written off the top of my head here goes!!! lol

what if ...the one you loved was always there? and they never told you that they wanted to give up on your relationship.

What if..you could find your real friends with out being hurt and humiliated by people you thought were your friends?

What if.. you didnt have to go through the pain of missing someone and they wouldnt have to be forsed to part with you?

What if..  no one lied or abused your trust?

What if.. no one died, but lived a happy life free from, sickness and hurt?

What if.. there were no bullies who went around picking on people for their own entertainment?

What if.. everyone was treated equally? and werent judged by there appearance or backround, but by their personality.

What if... Adam and Eve had never stolen the fruit from gods tree, would we all live forever?

What if... we could achieve anything we set out to acheive?

What if all these things were true? would the world be a better place.


Submitted: June 20, 2009

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Keerow Ameratsu Imorai

You'll find idealist liking this poem a lot... good job...

Sat, June 20th, 2009 8:35am

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thanks

Wed, July 1st, 2009 11:07pm

Chococat

i have an anser to all these questions, IN YA DREAMS! ????

Mon, June 29th, 2009 4:52am

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lol

Tue, June 30th, 2009 2:41pm

The Divine Miss M

nice one jem. ????

Fri, October 23rd, 2009 6:25am

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thanks liz

Fri, March 19th, 2010 9:51pm