a drop of water.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

i was just thinking about life while i was sitting in the shower and the water was running own te shower walls.

so just something that inspired me to write something intersting. :)

hope you like it.

life is like a drop of water

slowly becoming what it is going to be

slow at first then faster it grows, growing up big for its life

it falls down, and has to survive by itself for a while

then it gets closer to ending

it becomes unstable and wobbly

at its weakest point when it finally hits the ground

there life goes, slow at first but quick to finish

falling all by its lonesome as it grew

then it all ended when it it rock bottom

and in its a place another drop starts to form

slow at first, then faster its life goes

until one day, waking up is not a possibility.


Submitted: May 23, 2012

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zelda Xx

your amazing, we love you, in bed :)

Wed, May 23rd, 2012 3:57am

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hehe why thankyou. c;

jokes.

Tue, May 22nd, 2012 10:04pm

Brian W

Now I know why my daughter spent so long in the shower...Sitting watching water drops ;-)....
But insperation finds us in many places...Well written and thought out but if you watch closely the next time you will see the water droplet will join or merge with others on its journey....

Wed, May 23rd, 2012 10:02pm

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good point, thankyou.

Wed, May 23rd, 2012 4:14pm

Maddie Patrick

I love the passion in the poem. A very wonderful outlook on life.

Fri, May 25th, 2012 2:53am

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thankyou hun.

Sun, May 27th, 2012 4:56pm

Vikrant

A very beautiful poem. The personification of the water drop is wonderful.

Sat, May 26th, 2012 1:59pm

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awwww thankyou so much.

Sun, May 27th, 2012 4:57pm

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