a heart as deep as the ocean.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

this is about my bestfriend who is going through a rough time.

she hides behind her blond curls

her sadness unaware to everyone but me

she gives a fake smile as bright as the sun

her heart is breaking from the misery

her soul is tired of crying

but her gorgeous blue eyes as deep as the ocean

hide her cracking dreams

she swallows her unhappiness and takes a hollow breath

for the fire her heart is slowly drowning in blue death


Submitted: November 08, 2011

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Hey, I think you should try to talk with her about everything that's going on. I mean, it hurts to see your best friend in pain, seeing them flash fake smiles, trying to hide in their own emotions.

This is an understandable poem, very nice, and very relatable of course.

Tue, November 8th, 2011 3:16am


anyways, thanks.

Tue, March 20th, 2012 8:27pm


You seem to have so much sadness inside. Your writing is touching. I hope it helps to put it out there. We are listening. Thanks for sharing.

Sat, November 19th, 2011 5:19pm


awwww thankyou.

Tue, March 20th, 2012 8:19pm


Oh my god... Thank you so much for writing this for me. It captures everything perfectly... beautiful.

And i'll be alright Tammi, don't waste your time worrying about me

Mon, November 21st, 2011 11:36pm


i have to worry about you,your my bestfrined, i love you.

Tue, March 20th, 2012 8:17pm

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