her silence....

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

this is about a girl.

she sits in silence

like a cat stalking its prey

her shakes

like a house of cards about to fall

a single tear rolls down her face

like the first drop of rain before a storm

her heart is slowly stopping

like a clock thats run out of batteries

frozen in that moment

her soul cant forget

the misery that wont go.


Submitted: November 10, 2011

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Theyoungman

I like this nice job =]

Fri, November 11th, 2011 1:40am

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thankyou.

Tue, March 20th, 2012 8:22pm

Cyber Dood

You've chosen your words well. The images this propels paints the picture of a moment almost frozen in time. The feelings are portrayed fully. "like the first drop of rain before a storm." Great.

Fri, November 11th, 2011 2:02am

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thankyou.

Tue, March 20th, 2012 8:21pm

sweet agony xo

Thanks guys

Fri, November 11th, 2011 9:38am

bobthebuilder

Wow. To be able to say so much with so few words, amazing.

Sat, November 19th, 2011 5:13pm

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awwwwww, im glad you liked it.

Tue, March 20th, 2012 8:20pm

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