hold my hand, leave me feeling grand.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

just something i wrote while in creative writing class. but i like it, and hope you do as well. :)

Kiss my face, leave it without a trace.

Close my eyes, before I realize.

Hold my hand, leave me feeling grand.

Hug my soul, for I cannot control.

Grasp my heart, before I fall apart.


Submitted: March 07, 2013

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Brian W

You take a creative writing class :-) I have thought about trying to do one of those but wonder if I am smart enough...A few lines and so much is said....I would have switched the first two lines around...So your eyes were shut before the rest followed :-)
But then I have not taken any classes

Thu, March 7th, 2013 1:08am

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thanks for the tip. :)

and its just a course you can choose at high school. c:

Wed, March 6th, 2013 5:15pm

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