Poem by: swimFire
sad, silent, angry, mad, silence, noise, quiet
Submitted: June 13, 2009
It fills the house
Even though I know
Only a few feet away
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wow, even though it cam from no where this is amazing, I soo get it! it could mean anything, and I like poems that are like that, poems that you can decipher in many different ways!! WOW AND WOW. this is soo good. the fact that it is so simple makes it perfect!!! woot!
Thanks! :) I'm glad you like it lol my poems usually suck.
Very nice, swimFire.
rele rele good! short, but awesome. (like hassanah lolz)
lol im not sure hassanah would like that comparison
wow. powerful. amazing. really nice.... :)
Thanks :] haha, i think this is the only poem i've ever written that doesnt suck
It is short but says so much. It is actually very good.
Interesting poem. :)
You know how to use words perfectly...:)
wow, I really liked this! Came out of nowhere, but sounds like it comes straight from the heart. Beautiful =]
Thank you :]
I like the ambiguity of this piece and the undefinable surrealist themes but the language use could be a little more descriptive and poetic.
Thanks for the advice :]
very very good, that entirely describes my mood currently! Kudos!
Hi. I can tell from your profile that you like activity and action, hence the dislike of silence?
Anyway, well written. Ricky.
Maybe a big part of the reason my iPod's attached to my hand at all times lol
Thanks for reading! :]
that was really good for a short poem, very concentrated with emotion. brilliant.
Thank you :]
I love your name by the way haha I fall a lot too
Frequently up the stairs haha
Wow. I really like your writing, and this one just really spoke. There's a lot behind it and it's really good. Almost wish there was more to it. Keep me posted, I really like your work!
Thank you!!!! I don't write many poems but if I put up any more I'll definitely let you know! :]
Short and sweet. Excellent. (: Zoe. x
i think it's a nice poem!
it can be interpreted in different ways, but i think that if it was a bit longer, i could perhaps understand the essence of it better.
i agree with t0goth, it's a tiny bit overrated, but good work nevertheless!
wow i like this alot. I took it as.. we sometimes think there is nothing or no one there for us, when in the back of our mind we know there is someone right there for us and we ignore it and pass it off.
Thanks for reading!!
It was short and interesting. Intriguing, too. I like it!
I agree with Wandiola!
It could mean anything and that's why it's amazing! (:
Thank you so much! :]
Really good. Short but very powerful. Enjoyed reading it. =)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :]
wow..that was creative and amazing i loved reading it ...
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