I'll save you

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Loosely based on a story I wrote not too long ago...
Please, I' not really good at poems... ;D

I'll save you

You are a stranger that
wanders throughout the country

You sold your soul,
You seek freedom

I stand alone
Away from all and
Then you came
and changed my fate

You smile and hide your pain
You still do the same today
I sigh at your Deceitfulness
For all I can claim

You cry endlessly in the night

I hear you sob ,
But I let you alone
all the time

I am unaware of your desire
I ask you one day,
And you spat,
shut up,

You never do that
You apologize and weep
You escape with shame on your face
Realizing your mistake

The next day I see you sleeping behind a tree,
muttering words in your peace
I heard you say you need freedom
And trounce evil's feat

You wake up greeted by my grin,
and then I say
'You changed my fate'
A smile was all you give

One day, you'll see,
You will feel the freedom that you seek,
I'll guide in your fears,
I will save you from your lonliness

You saved me before,
Can I not save you too?
This will be my chance to repay you,
I will save you...

Submitted: May 02, 2009

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Add Your Comments:



Are you going to post that story? :)

Sun, May 3rd, 2009 5:46am


Uh... I don't think so. :D

Sat, May 2nd, 2009 10:47pm



Sun, May 3rd, 2009 2:01pm


yes really. got a problem? hmm?

Mon, May 4th, 2009 12:22am


You are really very good at writing poetry... this poem establishes this truth beyond doubt. I loved the desire to be the saviour of your yesterday's saviour... Very artistic!!!

Mon, May 11th, 2009 4:48pm


Ah, Thanks a bunch!

Mon, May 18th, 2009 1:50am


really beautiful.
it has almost a peaceful tone to it.
Great job. i enjoyed it.

Sat, May 23rd, 2009 5:41am


Thank you very much!

Fri, May 22nd, 2009 10:50pm

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