Ripples Of The Rich

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My Interpretation on the middle east conflict.

Ripples Of The Rich

How did she cope and survive a normal day
nobody should have to see their love go away
half the bed empty where he used to lay
sheets perfect and waiting for that special day
only if the war goes his way
and they kill innocent people and do what they say
as soldiers of the thrashing tongues
politics the body, soldiers the lungs
but without lungs politics could not live
should the soldiers stop and try to forgive
those who killed his family tree, relieve
their emotions that cast them across oceans
for the reason of politics and vengence
the rich cause more than crashes to the economy
families lost for a company, controversy
is the reason why his life is at risk face it
theyre rich but scared so they make armies
to act as their gun when they try to make you un
derstand why your husband is leaving, before his son
can meet him. its for your country so powerful already
oil isnt steady thats the real reason be ready they might
come to you next dont be vexed let your boy go fight
afterall you would die for your country day or night

Takatifu.Tahir.Peace


Submitted: September 14, 2010

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Takatifu

picture is by psychoangeliki

Tue, September 14th, 2010 11:11pm

Mike Florio

I like your rhymes here.

Wed, September 15th, 2010 12:31am

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thank you very much. i didnt know if it should be under lyrics or poetry.

Wed, September 15th, 2010 8:39am

aaihalbs

Beautiful work, very strong message,
"politics the body, soldiers the lungs" is one of the best metaphors I've seen in a while. And the meaning in "why your husband is leaving, before his son" is tremendous. Brilliant title as well. This poem is amazing, excellent work. :)

Thu, September 16th, 2010 2:56pm

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thankyou again. your comment made my day haha.

Thu, September 16th, 2010 10:14am

mikers

I really like this, it has a great, powerful message. I felt the emotion from it as well, because it's so realistic.
My favourite line though was, "when they try to make you understand why your husband is leaving, before his son
can meet him"
Great job on this.!

Thu, September 16th, 2010 7:35pm

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thankyou very much. i hope you can read my new poem when i write it, you will like it very much i hope.

Thu, September 16th, 2010 1:15pm

pakla

should i crown you the King of Lyric. wow, loved it!

Mon, October 25th, 2010 4:37am

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haha no i dont think i deserve that, thank you so much for reading my poem

Sat, November 6th, 2010 12:46pm

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