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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

If you love someone that you'd risk everything for them, it's true love

It seems we're here again.

So much for effort

Isn't it clear we're here again?

Our thing right where we left it

A delusion is a flight, first class to nowhere.

While a dream is a blueprint.

A plane to go there

It seems we're here again

Was there a glitch in my method?

Isn't it clear we're here again?

Let's get new GPS

So next time you see this place, remember we were alone

We'll bring our children from home

I'm gonna go there

Well, anyone think they can do it better?

Well come on

Hold on, we can make it

Stack whatever on top I can take it

It seems we're here again

This is the right direction

And I promise on all existence that if it breathes then it is our witness

We have unfinished business, you and I

And so my word is I'll cross those bridges

With zero regard for limits and distance from you and I


Submitted: November 30, 2014

© Copyright 2021 Talique Metz. All rights reserved.

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unmasked delusions

Wow I'm so impressed with this and it's beautiful in such a unique way. I don't have any words to describe how perfect this seems to me....it's like all the words are soldiers working together to win the reader over with so much power and truth. This was so strong. "Delusion is a flight, first class to nowhere. While a dream is a blue print. A plane to go there." That was so smart and I liked how this line gave me hope: "Hold on, we can make it, stack whatever on top I can take it." Plus it was well said, Very good!

Wed, January 7th, 2015 4:28pm

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That means a lot. Thanks for reading

Wed, January 7th, 2015 9:05am

natalayaevans

Hmmmm... What should I say???You have such an amazing way with words. Your words are a perfect blend of modernity and a certain charm. The 3rd verse about dreams and delusion... That one was my favourite. You cleverly use words. And yeah also the last verse, that too got my attention. Loved it. As for the whole poem, it was damn good

Wed, February 4th, 2015 8:00pm

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Thanks for reading

Wed, February 4th, 2015 1:46pm

Maggie Williams

Wow, I'm really glad I read this. You word your sentences so eloquently together. Wonderful job:) (Sorry I just got to this request now)

Fri, February 27th, 2015 9:21pm

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Thanks for reading

Fri, February 27th, 2015 6:27pm

Criss Sole

This had a very good flow, and I enjoyed reading it.

Sat, April 4th, 2015 7:48am

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Thanks for reading

Sat, April 4th, 2015 6:37am

Yulia

Hello there i decided to check some of your stuff...And i chose this =)...This was just beautiful and very emotional,you really have such an amazing way with words!..And you use them very well...Great poem,keep on writing and wish you all the best =)

Sat, April 25th, 2015 6:53pm

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Thanks for reading

Sat, April 25th, 2015 4:26pm

Grammarbully7

This is truly deep. It speaks about the treasures of love and I'm only speechless right now. It's really nice!

Fri, July 10th, 2015 12:18pm

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Thank you

Fri, July 10th, 2015 9:34am

Mikayla Lisherness

T... This was an amazing poem! .... Was this about you and I?

Fri, July 8th, 2016 5:14pm

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In a way, yes

Fri, July 8th, 2016 10:52am

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