My Stranger Chapter 1?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

Um To Explain? Love.Fantasy. i duno realy? Lmao

I opend my eyes and there he was again. just like he said be would be, he crouched down beside my bed, as he did the night before and stroked my cheek.
i looked into his cold eyes,I was half asleep but i knew this was real.
No bodys touch ment as much to me,As his did.When he was there i felt safe,wanted..loved
We Were completley diffrent in almost every way but it felt so right. we wasnt doing anything other than being friends. no kisses nos not anything.
I didnt even know his name.But he could move me in a way nobody elce could. litraly.
He lent over and pressed his cold cheek on mine as he whisperd into my ear the same words he would everynight.And& i nodded,like i did everynight.
I could feel the cold night through my open window,Watching my curtains flapping about in the wind just exited me.
I got out of bed and went over to my window, I looked back and smiled in to the cold eyes that twinkled in the moonlight,Then Smoothing his coat down he smurked and came over to me
I grabbed my strangers hand and off we flew into the night.
That Night we sat on the church roof,we talked and talked for hours.I wondered what my parents would do if they found my empty bed,But once he spoke,i'd forget about the world. it was me and him.
Time flew,and before i knew it the sun was starting to rise,
he took me home..It didnt feel like home with out him there,I would much rather be on a cold roof with him all night,than apart for a few hours.But i learnt by now..He Had to go.When i was home i flung my self on my bed with my head in the cushion
''I wish i could be with you forever'' I mumbled,he came and sat on the bed beside me,I sat up.
He looked into my eyes and smiled,
''I know'' he whisperd my heart sank as he got closer,we were now face to face..he tilted his head slightly and i knew what was about to happen.
I closed my eyes and leaned in the rest of the way..I was scared.I'd never kissed anyone before and he knew,Cause I told him everything,yet i didnt even know his name...
He held the back of my head and started to kiss me,our kiss turned pashonate ,he had a firm grip on my hair and was kissing me all down my neck.He started to kiss my mouth using tounge i just copeid his routene i had no clue.He smiled at me for a moment,His eyes were so crewl and cold yet his touch was so soft. How could something so wrong feel so right ? He got up and walked over to the window,
''I Dont even know your name'' i sighed
''Dorian'' And at that he was gone...but indeed my first kiss was the best first kiss ever.

Submitted: August 14, 2009

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itsz supposed to say kissing or HUGGS* (N) dam Dammm

Fri, August 14th, 2009 3:25am


That's a great story hun, keep writing you never know where your characters will take you! It's cool how you started with her first kiss,I'm interested in how this will develop. Do you have any idea where the story is heading?

Fri, August 14th, 2009 10:03am


(: Part 2 nowww onnn pg (:

Fri, August 14th, 2009 4:39pm


Yeahh.... ii've Planned it all out kindof' ii Justt need to find the right wordsz to explain. (: Thanks FOr Taking YOuh'R Time ToO Read iit (:

Fri, August 14th, 2009 2:06pm


luv it. keep me updated, and please read my story.

Wed, January 27th, 2010 12:30am

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