Falling from Light

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic
Poem about the darker side of love. Its based around a friend of mine who is madly in love with a guy who is bad. shes knows he is bad and that he doesnt feel the same way about her and treats her terribly but she can't help escape the "prison" her feelings have made for her.

THIS IS MY FIRST POEM! It doesn't have any particular form, its all over the place, not sure if it's any good, any feedback would be welcomed. Thanks

Submitted: March 26, 2011

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Submitted: March 26, 2011



The darkness sleeps beside me
It keeps me concealed and safe
Where else can I go from here?
When the shackles are tight
And hope is not in sight
He stands free

The prisoner who fears freedom
And the victim who fears salvation
Free passage to heaven, remaining in damnation
It is my fate
To feel love but want hate
He roams free

The others sleep beside him
They keep him fulfilled and great
When will he go from there?
To find the next life
To plunge in the knife
And stop them from being free

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