fallen over

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

this poem is based on friends who have cheated the poet and the poet now regrets as she knew that her choice for her friends was wrong.

keepin quiet in the darkness of life,

oh the phrase 'Im happy' is dyin away,

well how can it be ?

because now they call me a loser,

Yes i am a loser , i feel it ,

but somwhere deep within,

a voice keeps telling me '' no your not''

how harder i try to get up,

i fall again with a big slap on my heart,

you may be thinking why?

well ill tell you,

It all started , when i truly trusted them,

i thought that they ''ll be with me, forever,

with a sincere heart ,

no, but i was totally wrong,

it all turned upside down,

Instead of joy and happiness

they gave me loneliness ,sorrow and untold misery,

taught me to hate my life ,

I fell down in a big hole of loneliness,

this where i am now

fallen apart , broken into pieces........................

and that is left with me is a broken heart.


Submitted: December 06, 2012

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Another Lovely piece :) I really enjoyed reading this. You have a way with words and I feel like this one is also like an emotional roller-coaster like the previous one. One needs talent to write poems which you clearly have. Great work~

Wed, October 9th, 2013 7:19pm



Fri, October 11th, 2013 1:20am

Kenisha Liyanage

I feel sorry for you. Some friends are like that. It's just you have to chose the correct set of people as your Friends. Hope everything will be alright between you'll. Sorry for getting dragged out. Well about the poem now. It was really good and it was so touchy. You were able to express our thoughts in a manner so that the reader can understand and get a picture about the incident. Well overall it was a great poem. Well done!

PS: Congratulations. I guess you are the first one to receive a lengthy comment for the first time in my commenting history...

Mon, April 7th, 2014 1:30pm


Thankzz a lot

Sat, June 14th, 2014 9:33pm

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