the way i loved and the way i lost it

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This poem is based on a young girl who had sincerely loved her boy friend but at somepoint in her life her parents come to know about her love and restricts her by saying that they would never tolerate such a thing and also her brother and her father who are very agressive in nature even threatens her by saying that they would kill her boyfriend ,so the girl who always wants the good of her boyfriend lets him of the danger and asks him to forget her but he never listens and instead keeps complaining about her and refuses to listen to her.and now all her friends hate her and donteven tries to understand her part. at present the girl is in a horrible and pitiful condition.

When i was 14, i had my first love ,

a love which had no conditions,

i wanna to talk to him everyday,

i wanna walk with him everyday

i wanna see him everyday,

he always liked to sit near me,

he always wanted to hold my hands,

he always wanted me to stay near him,

like a small child who never liked to leave his dady 's hands,

and there we went hand in hand ,

in every dream that we share,

in every plan that we make,

when he sat near me i could hear his heart,

I felt i was in heaven ,

i felt as if some angel took me in my dreamworld,

i felt the innocence of love ,

i felt the glory of love,

i never understood anything else ,but love

it was glorious,and it was full of happiness,

when i leave my house ,to see him

i prepare many questions ,

but I forget, wheni see him

i dont know why ? but i forget all of it

one look and that's it i get lost in his eyes,

those charming black eyes,

i loved to touch his hair which was curly enough for me to play,

and he liked it,and always asked me to do the same,

i felt like never before , had i such a love ,,,

yes this was my first love...................

a love which is always precious in my heart,

and there it went like the thrown away love ,

with deep scared wounds in my heart,

all i have is a mind full of pain,and a heart in vain,

I warned him of the danger that' ll abide him,

if he continues to be my lover ,but no he neverwill he listned,

and at last i had no choice, but to leave him ,

i had to prosound some sad words and this is where i leave him,

I never had a choice, but to leave him, if i had i would'nt have left ,but no i dont have,

cuz the only choices that were left was either his death or i have to leave,

so i chose the 2nd one which every girl would chose , so as to see him alive,

even though i am restricted from loving him, i wanna see him alive,

and here am i with this lost love,

the way i loved him and the way i lost him..................................................................

everyday when i think of it tears run down through, my cheek,

but this love will always be precious in my heart though i will never show it.


Submitted: December 10, 2012

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This is such a sweet yet a sad poem :) You have done a wonderful job of portraying all the emotions. Really Flawless. Job Well done. I'd love to read more from you.

Wed, October 9th, 2013 7:15pm



Fri, October 11th, 2013 1:22am


Aww that is a sad yet, good poem

Fri, November 1st, 2013 4:38pm



Sat, November 2nd, 2013 9:36pm


I think this poem was sad, yet well worded. Good job.

Fri, January 24th, 2014 5:45pm


thank u joel

Sat, January 25th, 2014 6:29pm

Kenisha Liyanage

I feel so sorry for the girl. What a horrible situation? It's like a situation where a person is asked to chose life or death. Well overall the poem was good but there parts where it went out of the pace. Well done!

Mon, April 7th, 2014 1:20pm


Ill imprrove nxt time thank u reading

Sat, June 14th, 2014 9:35pm

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