this short story is basiclly saying i am wat i wanna b

Elizabeth  Liz dossous
Chapter 1: where do I go
Im here lost in a world where my thoughts mean nothing to other people where stupid stuff is getting people killed where dament a 25 cent brownie cost 35 cent. Where do I belong I ask myself everyday how am I going to survive among people who don’t understand me. People that talks behind my back. There r ways to show you that you r what you wanna b.
Chapter 2: acceptance to whom I am
Being me is hard to accept like knowing one mistake gets me a beating, one improvement gets me not even a congratulations like damn what does it take for a 16 year old girl to b happy wit what and who she is a Haitian African American. You would think 16, shouldn’t you be having the best darn time in your life well NO im not I hate the way I look the way I smell ,taste the way I take life u wouldent think that guys liked me for who I am but no they liked me because I had (front and baq). WOW sometimes life take you on roller coasters u enjoy it at first then right then and there BAM u find yourself hanging by a string of thread. And you ask yourself wasn’t I just enjoying myself wasn’t I just thanking god for giving me life and this comes an drops a hundred ton on me I feel like that for most days but look u, me , we ,well get thru this cause out of every distressive person there is a family member or friend that loves you. Like me I felt alone at times but once I found I had a whole group of people by me I realized I won’t let yesterday faze me I’ll let tomorrow come upon me an that’s what most of us young girls need even young women an women them self’s its hard at first but u need to start at some point right its earthier rock bottom midpoint or where ever your are. First in order to get u ready for a new change say this pledge everyday;
I would not let me be torn down by anyone but myself I would not blame anyone for my mistakes because I made them I will live my life and love it. Because
I am me I can do wonders I just have to prove myself pleasing people isn’t in my mind pleasing me is what I need to do. So TODAY I am a new and improved woman and will b.
Saying this everyday to yourself or in front of a group will make u be in charge of your life.
Chapter 3: today I’m a new and improved women
Today is a great day because we have learned to passed the step that our lives are being taken over by people that really doesn’t love us. Today treat yourself you have a new and improved you. You have transferred your soul gaven up everything that didn’t feel right in yo and  in your gut. And don’t make excuses saying I can’t make it without being told what to do. The truth is you can its just that you are afraid that you are gonna be wrong an its ok because everybody is wrong sometimes. This worked perfect for me do something good for yourself i garantee youll love it

Submitted: July 08, 2008

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every one this is my first short story i hope u like it

Tue, July 8th, 2008 3:54pm


This is really good. You have to work on the grammar and spelling. But I like it. I think is can relate to some women or young women that feel that way. There are a lot of girls, teens girls, women that don't love themselves because of the environment they are in. This could be an encouragement for those who think less of themselves. Keep up the writing girl.

Tue, July 8th, 2008 6:11pm


Thanks. I will

Sun, July 20th, 2008 11:01am

Spicy Brown

Ummm......Girl you need to work on your spelling. There's a lot of mistakes you have done but I would say it pertty good for your first time.

Wed, July 9th, 2008 8:26pm



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