Submitted: July 08, 2008
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This is really good. You have to work on the grammar and spelling. But I like it. I think is can relate to some women or young women that feel that way. There are a lot of girls, teens girls, women that don't love themselves because of the environment they are in. This could be an encouragement for those who think less of themselves. Keep up the writing girl.
Tue, July 8th, 2008 6:11pmUmmm......Girl you need to work on your spelling. There's a lot of mistakes you have done but I would say it pertty good for your first time.
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every one this is my first short story i hope u like it
Tue, July 8th, 2008 3:54pm