the demigod

that increases to the masses

with some blasphemy and rage,

along with the unraveling of the petrified cure

I see the treason that has been over lapsed

I hear the crash of rage,

i stumble upon and frown on some lies,

with dis loyalty and demise,

with the demigod passing us along ,like petty thief's

the truth has just begun, the battle of wits,

my dedication is griping my thoughts,

to we seen the truth unfold, the passion that lies with in

the pen-amble the unfolding of the unfortunate

shall rise to the confusion. I seem to blunder

thoughts so chaotic and ramped twisting the reality in to fusion ,

still I'm ridiculed and undermined, with a hint of dismay

from someone truly greater than thee

honestly, with my mistakes i shall

replenish my thoughts.

Submitted: July 05, 2010

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Tis okay....

Mon, July 5th, 2010 2:00pm



Fri, July 9th, 2010 1:48pm


wow.. interesting...
i kinda lost the main point but i was seeing some pretty weirdly aweseome stuff in my head as i read it. good job.

please feel free to stop by and read and comment on some of my works.

Mon, July 5th, 2010 2:02pm


cool thanks

Fri, July 9th, 2010 1:49pm

munkiC munkiDU

It's not easy to follow, and after the first half, you lost me completely. But I did like the metaphor 'I seem to blunder the page wincing for breath'.
Nice pen name, by the way. Is it from that old film, or Roger McGough's poem? Just curious ^.^

Mon, July 5th, 2010 4:56pm


ok thanks

Fri, July 9th, 2010 1:50pm

Azaleas secrets

It seems chaotic in the beginning but finally i find it a ptogression from anarchy towards harmony. it successfully runs a tough obstacle course.

Tue, July 6th, 2010 8:19am


yeah i would not know but,i do see that i could be confusing,
but it just came out like that!i wrote right on the booksie page than publish it did not even really read it, i had thoughts in there just not so clear, but i do thank you for your comment, very much!

Fri, July 9th, 2010 1:55pm


i don't exactly get it... but i like it...

Tue, July 6th, 2010 1:37pm


thank you

Fri, July 9th, 2010 1:50pm


I like this(= a lot haha. It was really vivid.....well to me.

Tue, July 6th, 2010 5:05pm


thank you much!

Fri, July 9th, 2010 1:51pm


intense poem, i lke it

Mon, July 12th, 2010 5:58pm


thank you

Tue, July 13th, 2010 2:15am

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