time in a distance,dream the field ,feel the rain, moment in time mirror reflects on u.view the rain from a distance kill the song, that sings inside the rain. heal the pain the sad sorrow makes, feel the moment, for awhile, let the mirror reflect on u.dream the field dream the moment, and let come to u , honest lies and honest truth luck seems so vain. lying and lie seems so fare.time slides.the mirror reflects upon you.time in a distance bottle in a jar seems so odd.

Submitted: May 29, 2010

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hm, i like it, wish i could tell you more, but, you got me thinking now....it's good.

Wed, June 2nd, 2010 5:34pm


.............thinking well thats good, there is always a message well im glad u like it,and thank u for reading that,

Wed, June 2nd, 2010 5:38pm


That is really good, I like it.

Sun, May 8th, 2016 3:49am

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