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?ugly the way u feel,ugly the way ya stop, to see your self, people view u ugly,smile in good fate.lol.ungly is a cry of, shame,skip please to find your, peace ugly?look look in a ugly paradise, ugly shame in time ,heal the vision in ones mind, ugly time to see me and mine ugly times, come for awhile,see ya ugly.


Submitted: May 29, 2010

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Azaleas secrets

Heya! You seem to be angry... is ungly a deliberate spelling mistake?

Sun, June 6th, 2010 6:35am

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someone, all ready used the name ugly, so i just added a n to it. i published that one poem and now people are reading my other poems,no one read at first,lol p.s i iove how u use decaying fast,to desribe passing time, thats your talent!

Sat, June 5th, 2010 11:52pm

cloudsgrey

yes i feel the ugliness in the everywhere of my insides sometimes, i can relate.... although no one is ugly, o.k.! except those ones who are cussing rude and mean and reallly do hate the world to death....be good to yourself

Mon, June 7th, 2010 4:00pm

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it was more of a figure of speech,the way people view them selfs, but thanks for your comment and your thoughtfulness and worries. but truly im not ugly outside or inside.

Mon, June 7th, 2010 10:07am

cloudsgrey

ha, that is a comment... thank you for telling me that!

Mon, June 14th, 2010 9:18am

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ok any time thank u

Mon, June 14th, 2010 4:33am

cloudsgrey

no you are not

Wed, June 16th, 2010 10:13am

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thank u best complement ive got in a long time.lol thank you

Wed, June 16th, 2010 5:08am

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