The Dark Abyss

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

this is probably the best poetry i have ever written but i dont like being cocky so you guys decide on how it is.

ive got cornerd up and led down into a deep tunnel of my imagination with only the echos of my voice that scream out for help everytime i scream, my voice gets softer and softer untill i can barley hear myself and then your hear yourself and know that the sound of your voice is filled with agony, agony that led us to this very day, agony that can only be stopped by a knife to the heart. i am alone. i can only ride this rollercoaster for so long and i can only hold on to strings for a period of time until i relize this is all because of sorrrow, this is all because i think to much to myself. thinking is such a funny thing. you think of family and then before you know it your thinking of all the bad things that happened to you and your mind starts wondering how it can shut itself down for good. how it can stop thinking. lifes a maze. can you find your way out? most of the time your trapped inside your own mind desperatly wishing you were a little again grasping for your mothers hug but now you are trapped in an oblivion called your mind where there is no way out and no way to find anything again.my pen stares back at me in disgust , ran out of words to say because how can you write words of a life story onto a peice of paper when you have no little idea of the person you are. too much time sends you away into the deep folds of your brain , keeps you in there for a while not leting you know the person you have yet become


Submitted: December 11, 2012

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Neutrastaff

Immediately I saw that it's all jumbled together and it looks more like a story rather then a poem. I would suggest that you break up the lines and not have it all together like it is now.

Tue, December 11th, 2012 4:48am

the devious writter

im still working on it but thanks for the suggestion

Wed, December 12th, 2012 1:36am

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