"Shiver"

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

My first poem on this account.
"Shiver"...resembles shiver due to cold. Read it yourself and let me know how you feel:)

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Its such a beautiful evening

and a canary flies by

sings a lovely song for me

and dives into the oceanic sky

The blazing sun is its heart

whose warmth kisses my face

I open my arms wide

so that its sweetness I could taste

The humid breeze I inhale

Reminds me of earthy rains

The smell of it dissolves my pain

I close my eyes and inhale again

the shower of drops fall atlast

Drizzling as the sky cries

I look up at the clouds

Which now cover the heart of skies

The wind makes me shiver

and the thunder once more

I pull my blanket on

and shut my eyes close

The wondrous dream I dream

of playing soccer in the rain

I am muddy wet with marshy stains

Out of cold I shiver again

Next what I hear is chirping birds

telling me,"Its Time!"

The time you wake up and see

seven bands of colors in the sky

I raise my hands as if to touch

but I couldn't, its only play of light

Its so beautiful, leaves me breathless

As I gaze into the sky

With thudding of my steps I run down

My bare feet touching the cold, moist ground

The wind blows, I SHIVER again

Wondering, 'how big is the space bound!'


Submitted: March 24, 2012

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French

I like :) very well written

Sat, March 24th, 2012 12:44pm

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Thank you so much!!!

Sat, March 24th, 2012 6:34am

Deathstix

cooool! this is awesome!

Sun, March 25th, 2012 2:59am

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Hey! thanks!!:)

Sun, March 25th, 2012 3:49am

Brian W

A good poem and your words paint the scenery well....Keep writing

Sun, March 25th, 2012 9:16pm

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Awww, thank you soo much!!:)

Sun, March 25th, 2012 11:18pm

divyansh

woooooow.......
damn good yar.....
that soccer part reminded me of something, some sweet memories, me and my friends used to play soccer in rain and it was good as hell............
missing those soccer days, unfortunately those days can't come back.......
ok now coming back to your superb poem, it's really amazing imagining pictures while reading your words, and floating with them.....
keep writing.....

~DIV

Mon, March 26th, 2012 2:26am

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Yea, mee tooo!! I miss when I did play. Now everyone's busy bee!!:(
Yay! you liked it? Aw, thanks!!:)

Sun, March 25th, 2012 11:21pm

Christian Taylor

Great descriptions and detail with this poem! Excellent work! Keep writing! XD

Sat, March 31st, 2012 1:19am

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Thanks!! I will!!:D

Sat, March 31st, 2012 5:20am

Vikrant

As the poem progress it gives glimpse of a very colorful painting where whole the sky is a canvas.

Sat, May 26th, 2012 1:04pm

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Yes. Thank you so much for reading!:)

Mon, May 28th, 2012 6:49am

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