The unseen world

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A translucent dream, about a better world...

The unseen world

Beyond the green forests,
Beyond the streams
Beyond the wavy shores
Of my dearest dreams


There lies a land
Of sacred peace,
Under the starry sky
Surrounded by trees


A world free of sins,
A world of love,
Of eternal, merry life
With the stars above.


Onwards we march
Along life's perilous path
And forever should we move
With a strong, merry heart,


In life we be different,
In death we stand same,
And like leaves of a tree
Are from one stem.

Submitted: July 06, 2012

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SUBTLE,,,MESMERIZING,,,BEAUTIFULL...I loved the ryme and i loved the sweet power in the short verses...=]*

Fri, July 6th, 2012 7:53pm


Many thanks, Miss. :) I'm glad you liked it.

Sat, July 7th, 2012 2:58am


I like this one, it can speak to alot of people.

Thu, August 9th, 2012 4:09pm


Thanks. :)

Thu, August 9th, 2012 10:06am

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