Those forgotten

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A poem about old friends.

Those who we forget today

are not forgotten true

For if we truely forgot them

they would forget us too

But at a fleeting glance & smile

from one we've left behind

We slip sweetly t'wards rememberance

& blurred are redefined.

Submitted: June 21, 2008

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Simone Robinson

I love it :D it is very true ,keep writing. also please check out and comment on my work , thanx

Sat, June 21st, 2008 9:11am


thankyou. ive got a bookful that ive written but never bothered with. cheking out if theres any insightful critics floating around to help me out. youre writing some great stuff, keep it up =)

Sat, June 21st, 2008 3:21am

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