The Girl With The Green Door

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is a not-so-scary-horror about a girl, her mother and their green door.

The Girl With The Green Door

The old green car turned into the driveway and stopped just in front of me.  The battered car opened its door and a tall dark looking man climbed out.  He was dressed completely in black, with the exception of a grey scarf.  He had a long black cape and a wide brimmed hat.  His black-gloved hand was hovering over his pocket and I could see a slight glimpse of a silver gun.  He walked, hunched over as he neared our bright blue door.  I was scared, it was just me and Mum in the house and we didn’t have a gun.  “Mum” I said questionly, “someone’s here”, no answer.  I looked down the hallway and saw her standing far back from the door with a kitchen knife in her hand.  “Don’t answer the door” she said urgently.  I could detect a slight shakiness in her voice.  I was getting scared.  I ran to my bed and lay on the far wall, hugging teddy. 

Then I heard the noise of a knock knock knock on the door.  We both froze in fear, too scared to move.  Then a slam slam slam on the door.  I washed Dad was here.  Then a bang bang bang on the door handle.  The gun shorts so loud my ears had to readjust.  I could smell the smoke from the gun.  Then the door gave way the tall man stepped in standing straight with an angry look on his face.  What would happen next, I did not know. 


Submitted: May 03, 2016

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