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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Crime

Submitted: February 04, 2016

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Submitted: February 04, 2016

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1st Draft

Revised

(Shooting)

SILENTLY DRIVEN

A SCREENPLAY

BY
BAILEY GIANNINI

 

 

Fade in.

INT: MIKEY’S NIGHT CLUB DANCE FLOOR IN DETRIOT MI. NIGHT


Three friends are dancing on the dance floor. They’re jumping up and down. The camera moves up to reveal the DJ at the top of a high platform. Flashing lights are going on and off. The camera then focus back on the group of friends dancing.

 

CUT TO:


INT: MIKEY’S NIGHT CLUB BAR

 

At the bar area a tall man is sipping on Bud-Light. He’s tall and has a decent size mustache and beard. He’s not too muscular but he works out. He’s Caucasian A man from behind him taps him on the shoulder. Then David looks at the stranger. He’s smiling and him.

 

David

What, you’ve been staring at me all night?

 

The stranger dumps his Budweiser all over David. (Close up on David’s face) David gets angry and then lunges forward. He grabs the stranger and stabs him with a huge pocket knife that he had gotten out of his pocket. He stabs the man in the back. Blood squirts out everywhere.

 

CUT TO:

INT: MIKEY’S NIGHT CLUB DANCE FLOOR


Sara sees something suspicious going on over at the bar area. The camera switches, through the POV we can see David stabbing the club guest in the back with the large knife. Lots of blood is surrounding the guest. His face looks pale white.  Sara looks extremely worried and rushes over and gets involved. (Close up on Sara’s face.)

 

CUT TO:

INT: MIKEY’S NIGHT CLUB DANCE Bar area

 

Sara passes through the crowd of people. She then grabs David as he aggressively punches the guest several times in the face. The guest’s face is all covered with blood and dripping down his shirt. A puddle of blood surrounds him.

Security arrives.

 

David

(Yelling)

I’ll get you next time retard, go fuck yourself!

 

Sara

Shouting

David! David! David relax!

 

The crowd helps the guest member up. They all get blood on their hands. One person calls 911. The security guards escort him out. Their friends Daisy, Ronald and Adam follow.

 

 

EXT: GREEKTOWN CASINO, DETRIOT MI. NIGHT

They’re pushed out of the doorway. David falls onto the street. He wasn’t prepared for the hard push. He’s drenched in water. They help him up and they begin to run as they pull David away. Ronald is the only one who just exited without being kicked out. He reaches in his pocket and gets out a large knife. (Close-up)

 

Ronald holds the knife over one of the security guards throats. Then he slices his throat. Ronald karate kicks the other guard. Then he picks him up and slams him against the concrete wall. He smashes his head on the wall until his face is completely soaked in blood and passes out. Then he turns the other security guard and stabs him numerous times.

 

EXT: SMALL PARKING LOT-NIGHT

Daisy, Adam and Sara quickly get inside the car and pull out. They drive to their left. The POV captures Ronald running on the street and soaked in blood. David rolled down his window.

 

 

 

David

(Shouting)

Get in, now!

 

Ronald quickly climbs inside. The car is blue and is a convertible. They drive off.

 

Adam

Why tonight man, just why?


David

The fucker had it coming alright? He spilled his Budweiser all over me.

 

Ronald

So what? I had to kill a security guard for ya just to make sure he doesn’t talk. Then I had to drug the other one and make sure he’s dozed so he doesn’t remember a thing.

 

Sara

I’m sad that I didn’t get to hear my favorite song.

 

Adam

Well tough luck, David blew that for ya.

 

David

I know it.

 

Adam

You’re a real ass.

 

David

(Whispering as he smiles)

I know it.

 

From above we capture the car driving off into the darkness.


Opening credits begin

 The song Never gonna stop me by Rob Zombie starts playing:


EXT: DETRIOT MI. NIGHT

 

The POV glides over the city of Detriot. We see all different crimes happening in around. We hear the BANGS

Of gun shots.

 

INT: BASEMENT OF A THREE STORY MANSION ACROSS FROM A CARNIVAL. NAPLES, ITALY

 

A man in a black mask is torturing a young woman, in her twenties. His mask is all black and has no facial features what so ever. He is drilling into her stomach. Blood is squirting everywhere. She is hanging upside down and tied to a rope.

 

Woman

(Screaming in pain)

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!

 

 

SFX: RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR!!!!!!

 

CUT TO:

 

EXT: DETRIOT MI. BANK ROBBERY-NIGHT

Thieves are seen high above robbing backs and carrying out cash.


INT: HUNTINGTON BANK-NIGHT

A shooter shoots a woman down and blood splatters on the wall. Shooter #2 runs over and bangs a woman on the wall and smashes her head three times. He slits her throat and blood pours down. Then he cracks her neck backwards. Then stabs her in the chest. He lets go of her and she drops to the ground.

SFX: THUMP!

 

Shooter #1

Let’s go, we don’t have much time!

 

 

Shooter #2 leaves the knife in the woman’s chest and runs out. Then the police sirens are heard and as the shooters run off with the money and get in their black truck quickly the police arrive. One police officer sees the large bag of money.

 

POLICEMAN

(Shouting)

You two in the black truck, freeze!

 

The shooters drove off and the Police officer chases after them while the others go inside and investigate the crime scene. Then yellow tape is put up.

CUT TO:

 

EXT: OVERVIEW OF THE DETRIOT CITY

The title crashes onto the screen and then breaks off the screen. SILENTLY DRIVEN

 

INT: DAVID’S SMALL TRAILOR LIVING ROOM


From a high shot on the ceiling we see David, Adam and Sara sitting in the living room, David on in a single chair and Adam and Sara on a fold out couch. David is rubbing his left hand on the side of the big pocket knife. (Close up)

David has no expression and is waiting for Ronald to get back with the drugged security guard. (Close up on David’s face)

 

Adam

How long is this going to be man, me and Sara could’ve had sex by now man.

 

David

I don’t know I wasn’t there when Ron drugged the guy, we just have to wait you two can fuck each other all you want soon enough.

 

Sara and Daisy together

We’re bored.

 

David

Christ!

 

Suddenly Ronald walks in with the body. Then he throws the security guard on the floor in the center of the room.

 

Sara

Uh, there’s blood on the floor.

 

Adam

Who cares this place is a shithole anyway.

Let’s just get this done.

 

Fade to black.

Fade in.

The Security Guard’s eyes start to open slightly.

Ronald

There we go, now he’s waking up, still drugged though.

 

David

Good lets keep him that way.

 

We see them through the eyes of the Security guard.

 

Sara

Put him downstairs

 

Adam

How about the attic

 

Sara

No the basement.

 

David

Would you two shut up! We’ll figure this out.

 

CUT TO:

 

NORMAL VIEW.

David and his friends walk around the room.

David

First let’s drag his ass in the basement.

 

Sara

(Excited)

I won!


Adam

Shut the fuck up you didn’t win shit.

 

CUT TO:

Security Guard’s POV

 

They lift the security guard up. He’s big and fat.


David

Alright big fella, up you go.

 

They pick him up together. Then they carry him towards the hallway.


INT: Small Hallway

 

They can all barely squeeze through the hallway.
 

CUT TO:

NORMAL VIEW: They squeeze tight together.

 

David

(Shouting)

Watch the pictures on the wall!

 

Adam

I don’t think this place can get more screwed up than it already is.

 

David opens the basement door. The camera is facing downward and we see them through the camera’s POV

 

David

Throw em down.

 

They count to three and throw him down the stairs. The basement is pitch black. David closes the door.

CUT TO:

INT: Hallway

David looks at everyone.

 

David

The shows over now, I’lltake it from here.

 

Ronald

No, no, this is my mess I’ll clean it up.


David

Come on man, please, if it wasn’t for me we wouldn’t be in this situation.

 

Adam lights a cigarette and shakes his hand for a moment. Then he puts the lighter in his pocket. They all have ripped clothing and Sara is wearing a white tang top.

Adam takes the cigarette out of his mouth and breathes out the smoke.

 

Ronald

I’m telling you I’ll take care of this.

 

David

No you won’t, you always fuck up somehow.

 

Sara

Actually let’s let these two dumb heads work it out from here remember we want our bedroom action.

 

Adam

Yeah, I almost forgot about that.

 

Adam kisses Sara and then puts his arm around her. (Close up, camera can view David and Ronald debating)

 

Sara and Adam walk off around the corner and into bedroom.

 

Ronald

I’m telling you man I got this.

 

David

No you actually don’t.

 

Ronald rubs his face.

 

Ronald

(As he points to David)

I’m gonna go psycho if you don’t stand away from that basement.


David

No, I fucked up so I clean this up.

 

Ronald

I’m giving you to the count of three man!

 

David

Go ahead.

 

Ronald

One…

 

David doesn’t back away. 

 

Ronald

Two…

 

David

Look screw this I don’t have time for this.


Ronald

Three!

From a side shot we see Ronald rush over to David and they crash through the basement door and go tumbling down the stairs.

 

CUT TO:

INT: SMALL BEDROOM


Adam gets his pants on and Sara gets her tang top on.

 

Ronald

Here we go again.

 

Sara

I know right, it’s every fucking night with these two.

 

CUT TO:

INT: BASEMENT PITCH BLACK

We hear the sound of punching and stabbing. Then the camera switches to the stairway. Adam opens the door. Sara covers her mouth. They’ve turned the light one. With the flashing bulb we hanging from the ceiling we see both of them covered in blood andbleeding.

 

INT: LIVING ROOM IN DAVID’S SMALL TRAILOR


Daisy turns her head to the right of the hallway only to find them carrying Ronald and David. They lay both of them down on the floor.

 

Sara

Daisy you’re in medical school right?

 

Daisy

I was until I was expelled

 

Adam

(Shouting)

Now’s not the time for a fucking conversation Daisy needs to get her nice ass over here and help us out.

 

Daisy smiles and walks over.

 

Adam

(Shouting)
Quicker!

 

Daisy kneels down and expects the wounds. She sees large cuts and stab wounds.

 

Daisy

Alright get my large first aid kit.


Sara

(Panic voice)

Where is it?

 

Daisy

In the cupboard to your right in the kitchen top one.

 

Sara

Got it.

 

Sara walks out into the kitchen.

Adam taps both of their faces.

 

Adam

Wake wake we can’t go to a hospital!

 

Sara rushing back in with the first aid kit.

 

Daisy

Alright.

 

Both David and Ronald look like they’re about to pass out.

 

Daisy

Help me carry both of them into the bathroom.

 

Adam

What?


Daisy

We need to clean out their wounds then I can stitch them up.

 

Adam

Fine then lets make this fast.

 

They lifted both of their bodies up. Daisy and Sara held David and Adam grabbed Ronald’s legs.

 

Daisy

Are you really gonna drag him?

Adam

What other way is there I’m not that fucking strong here!

 

Daisy sighs. Then they take them down the hall.

 

INT: DECENT SIZED BATHROOM

 

Adam kicks in the door and they walk in with David first.

Adam then goes back in front of Ronald’s legs. (Low camera view)

 

INT: HALLWAY

Adam

If you don’t make this through I’m gonna have to kill you.

 

Ronald

(Softly in pain)

Fuck you.

 

Adam

I’m just saying.

 

Close up on Adam’s face.

 

INT: BATHROOM

 

Meanwhile, Daisy is running the water and getting soap in it. As the tub fills up and they both lift David up and put him in the bathtub.

 

Adam

(O.S)

How much longer! Remember we’ve got Ronald over here!

 

Sara

We just put David in the tub.

 

Adam

(O.S)

Well hurry the hell up!

 

Daisy cleans out his wounds. Then soaps up his body really good. Sara opens the first aid kit for Daisy.

 

Daisy

Quick the stitches!

 

Sara hands her the stitches (Close up)

The stitches are long and large

 

Daisy

You’ll be alright baby, come on.

 

She stitches David’s arms first then works up to his shoulders. Then around the rest of his body.

 

Adam

(O.S)

You guys better almost be done in there Ronald’s about to pass the fuck out over here!

 

Sara

Quick, quick!

 

Daisy quickly finishes David. She gives him some pain meds and then he falls asleep. Daisy checks his heart rate.

 

Sara

Well.

 

Daisy

He’s just passed out.

 

Sara

Oh good.

 

Adam

(O.S.)

Hello, ready for round two in there.

 

Sara

Hold your. (Pause…)

Daisy puts

Her arm on Sara’s hand.

 

Daisy

It’s fine. Yeah bring him in!

 

Adam drags him in. They help put him in the tub after David’s out and in the hallway.

SFX: SPLASH

 

INT: MASTER BEDROOM VERY SMALL 11:30 PM-NIGHT

 

Daisy and Sara throw David onto the bed. They drag Ronald next to the bed. They put a pillow under his head and get some blankets from a small closet. Then they walk out of the bedroom. Adam holds back Sara near the door way.

Adam lights a cigarette and takes it out of his mouth.

 

Adam

If they ever do anything as dumb as this shit I’m kicking them out, because they’re pretty fucked up right now.

 

Sara

Yeah, I know.

 

We see them tossing and turning. The blood is off of them but they’re wounds are beat red. Blood red and very sensitive.

 

Sara

(Whispering)

Let’s go.

 

They leave. Adam follows her. Adam also turns off the light on the wall to his left.

 

Fade to black.

In big letters: TWO MONTHS LATER. JUNE 28th, 2016

 

Fade in.


INT: SARA’S SMALL HOUSE, SARA’S BEDROOM-EVENING

They’re all sitting in her bedroom. David is flipping through some adult magazines. He covers his face with the magazine. Daisy looks at him in a sensual way. We see them sitting around.


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