It’s cold, icy cold
The sun at its peak
A day unlike any told
Strongly the wind flies
Wiping dusty storms
Along indistinct path
Cold, icy on the skin
Itchy on the tear duct
Bamboo poles shriek
Howling bitter protest forth
In trembly submission
Corn stalks bow
Subjects to a windy king
Huddled birds swing,
Upon faint telegraph lines,
One with the wind, it seems,
Whining away cold fear.
Market place disarray
Rushing to and fro,
One hand for the wrapper
Another for the head tie,
Women in tens hurry.
One leg hold for a tray
Another for the basket
Wares most get cover
Least they follow this wind
To long sought destination
Across graying skies
Kites dip and dart in tune
In self imposed obedience
To this windy whim
Children became birds
Arms liken wings
Bodies take to flight
As fantasies looms real.
Behind glassy window
We stood in mirthful
Attention
Laughter bursting forth
To salute a free wind
Submitted: March 22, 2007
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well, I just love the way you write, your imagery is very effective you succeed in transporting the reader. A lovely moment
Sun, April 1st, 2007 2:10pmLovely, I like. As on ehas already said brilliant imagery. to me, the line 'It’s cold, icy cold The sun at its peak' made me think how even though the sun is so hot, the world is so cold in other ways. Good work here me thinks.
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Great title and wonderful use of imagery. You capture the scene like photographs of moments in time. Excellent poem.
Thu, March 22nd, 2007 11:41pmAuthor
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thanks man .hope to upload my latest efforts soon..
Sun, March 25th, 2007 11:28am