Eyes like fiery coals
Glowing in its cloudless sky
Such allure that strips bare my soul
Leaving me scrubbed of all pretence
Didn’t your smile invade tonight’s dream?
Tossing and turning couldn’t evade your image
Finally surrendering when desire filled to brim
Inert feelings that sprung to outbound life
How can I not see with eyes closed?
When your imprint stalks my mind
Though you say we become uncrossed
My heart raises and falls only to you
Desperation darkens my soul’s fort
For light, that originates from thee
Is now cast in doubt some doubt
Laying hurt where smirks should be
Hush! My dream cast kitten
These quick tears raise storms
That floods compassion within
And washes aside presumed scorn
Submitted: February 23, 2007
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Your writing is unique, lovely, and fascinating! I haven't read ALL of your writing yet.., but I do believe I'll become a "fan". I look forward to reading more from you!
Fri, February 23rd, 2007 5:50pm
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my mouth becomes an o, as i punder the implicate of such words from such as you.would i cherish this feedback? will i read it over and over again as i wonder at my babyish talent as compared to yours? i really do think so....thanks..very much.
Mon, February 26th, 2007 5:10am
Once again a beautiful poem. Love your style!
SN
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Thanks man , it's alway nice hearing from you
only hope i can get online as often as i want to upload as much as possible...hope to read all of yours this week though
You have beautiful usage of language in this poem,
Excellent work!
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thanks my friend, i hope to do better. ive justuploaded my worst ones .. i hope you find time to read....peace
Mon, April 30th, 2007 12:49pmFacebook Comments
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zephyrmail
mmm--nicely put--easy flowing and many will relate to these thoughts...wonderful job !
Fri, February 23rd, 2007 4:16pmAuthor
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Yeah, i hope so too.thanks for the feed back
Mon, February 26th, 2007 5:00am