We stood in line
Hand chained to hearts
Our future tied to thumbs
Or so we thought
We bore the sun
We endured the rain
We braved bitter cold
Pulling tattered clothes closer
Vainly fighting elements
We stood in line
Patiently waiting
Beneath scraggy mangoes
For box welders coming
Swearing to let go not
If it is our mandate to steal
We braved bloody machetes
Steeling our pounding hearts
Against boos of gunshots
Vowing to sweat blood
For tomorrows touch hold
We stood in line
Awaiting the hangman's noose
Sunrise becoming sunset
Across untouchable beauty
Of land constantly raped
Time passed in sheol
The crow came home to rost
Box wielders!!!
Screamed children in joyful chorus
They too know the hangman's burden
They too wish it lifted
It all elapsed too soon
But we went home relieved
Rubbing stained thumbs with pride
Our walk a half waltz
But, we celebrated too soon
We stood in line
But the birds said in vain
The radio echoed it too
We defended our mandate
But others couldn't
Or died while we lived
We stood in line
To what end?
Our thumbprint tried
But this time like always
Made no difference
They still rigged the election
Submitted: May 03, 2007
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Very good I like this, hmmm to run a race through all your blood, sweet and craps knowing if you win it would not count. hero's are not quitters, this is beautiful
Fri, May 4th, 2007 3:32am
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THAT, my friend is the lot of the African masses.We vote year in and out ,yet it makes no difference.They take or sweat and blood and turn it to the fiery liquid that kills us ...thant for reading..I apologise for that angry tone of it..it was written in great anger. saw your work, great.
Fri, May 4th, 2007 10:34amFacebook Comments
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Ahh, mankind. An endless procession of waiting, and for what? Death? Love? Sex? maybe all of the above. A well written, well thoughtout piece. Well Done :)
Thu, May 3rd, 2007 8:36pmAuthor
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Yes sir, you my friend caught the nail on the head.I see the weakness of man and hope in pointing it out , there can atleast be a change.thenks for reading..
Fri, May 4th, 2007 10:30am