LOVE that becomes a Poison, poem by The Loner

LOVE that becomes a Poison

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Poem by: The Loner

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Status: Finished | Genre: Poetry | House: Booksie Classic

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This is my feelings towards someone i know and i admired so much.

Submitted: November 12, 2011

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Submitted: November 12, 2011

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I LOVE THIS GIRL

SHE ISN’T MY FIRST CRUSH

BUT SHE IS THE ONE I WAN TO MARRY WITH

I WANT TO BE SERIOUS WITH HER

I WANT HER TO BE MY WIFE

TO BE THE MOTHER OF MY CHILDREN

EVERYTHING SHE DOES IS BEAUTIFUL

EVERYTHING SHE DOES IS RIGHT

I AM DEEPLY IN LOVE WITH HER

I AM HAPPY WHEN SHE TALK TO ME

I AM HAPPY WHEN SHE REPLIED MY TEXT MESSAGES

AT ONE TIME I FEEL LIKE I AM THE HAPPIEST PERSON IN THIS WORLD

THEN SUDDENLY IT HAPPENS

THE TIME WHEN THE DARKNESS APPEARS

WHEN THE FEELINGS OF LOVE TURNED INTO POISON

SUDDENLY I BECOME ADDICTED TO HER

I WANT TO KNOW WHAT SHE IS DOING WITHOUT MY PRESENCE

I WANT TO CHECK ALL HER TEXT MESSAGES

I HAVE BECOME A STALKER

AND WHEN SHE TALKS WITH SOME OTHER BOY, I BECOME DEEPRRESSED

SO DEEPRESSED AND PAINFUL

MUCH MORE PAINFUL THAN ANY KINDS OF PAIN IN THIS WORLD

IT MAKES ME MISERABLE ALL THE TIME

I WANT HER TO APPRECIATE MY PRESENCE LIKE I APPRECIATE HER

THAT IT MAKES ME LOCKED AWAY FROM THE PRESENCE OF HUMAN

I AM THE UNHAPPIEST PERSON IN THIS WORLD

THEN THE TIME COMES

WHEN EVERYONE AND EVERYTHING HAS TO SAY GOODBYE

AS MY MEMORIES OF HER FADED AWAY AND SHE IS GONE

AND THE POISON SO AS THE ADDICTION GONE

BUT ONE THING IS FOR SURE

I ALWAYS WILL LOVE HER AND IF I SEE HER AGAIN

I WANT HER TO BECOME MINE FOR SURE

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Satansgoddess

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Sat, November 12th, 2011 2:46pm

I have never read a poem that meant so much to me before. I know what it feels like to want someone so badly....then the obsession happens. I thoughtI was the only person who ever felt this way but I guess not. This poem is very awesome. keep me updated on any thing else you write, please.

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Sat, November 12th, 2011 6:14pm

Sure, of course.Thanks anyway,I never thought that someone would read my poem.

BurningGlory

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Sun, November 13th, 2011 9:18pm

So much emotion in this...

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Sun, November 13th, 2011 10:23pm

Thanks.It is an expression of my feelings long ago.never thought someone would like it

RebeccaMiller

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Thu, September 6th, 2012 2:22pm

Wow! This really packs some emotion. I've never understood that kind of obsession before, but you've really made me think about it. There are two sides to every story. I hope you find someone you can love healthily someday.

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Fri, September 7th, 2012 6:50pm

Thank u for your encouragement.appreciate it