Poem by: The Novelist
poem, dumb, random
Submitted: March 23, 2012
Randomcolors picked by me
I have nothing else
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Cute and quirky, simple and sweet. I love it!
WOW! Talking about FUNNY! XD Now, question to all readers: Anyone else here besides me counted the syllables whilst reading? :D I dunno, I do that when I read haikus.
Anyway, LOL! nice one! XD LIKED for sure!
you are now one of my favorite people on booksie. i didn't really have much confidence in this one. i just wanted to put something up. made it at a young writers' conference. thanks for reading!
short, simple, colourful, i like it :D
i do enjoy colors. (my apologies to those who are color blind).
Yes, I count sylables, I pay attention to form, & I appreciate those who stick to it... This was a good read... Haiku, I think is one of the more difficult forms of poetry to do right...I appreciate all efforts
yeah, i just wrote it at a writers' conference once. people said it was good. thanks!
I liked it, I think it sounded a little sad though. Beautifully written!
thanks! it was just randomly written at at writers' conference
You really surprised me!
I was not expecting it!
What is a 'haiku' (or whatever it is)?
thanks! a haiku is a japanese poem with three lines the first of which consists 5 syllables, the second has 7, and the last has five again.
hehehe, thats funny. it made my day:D
A very colorful poem XD thanks for the smile this morning! I love it
I get very clever sir... very clever indeed (slow clap)
Why, thank you.
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