Vulnerable (Poem)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
This is some writing I have worked on about someone I really care about. I don't know if it really fits under the poetry category but I couldn't really think of a better category. It's just how I feel.

Submitted: April 07, 2014

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I can’t remember a time where I’ve thought about you more. I know you more than when you were still in my life, when you were still my resilience, my beauty, and my fire. That was before I felt it burn. You ignited me and made me burn brighter than anything else could. That’s how I felt. I felt vulnerable. I was vulnerable, and it allowed me to feel every word you whispered, every tear I cried, and every moment you loved me. You were able to open up without saying a word. You trusted me more than anyone else did. And that was love. I felt every piece of your heart even when you were vague. I was so vulnerable that when I lost you I could feel a thousand of your tears for everyone I cried. My thoughts went from thinking about you, to thinking of how I lost you, to thinking of you. Maybe someone else is feeling how I did. Maybe she’s drunk in love and is feeling all of the things I felt. I hope she’s thinking of you.


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