Wastes

Poem by: TheBlankThought

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depression hurt

Summary

Depressing thoughts of life.

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Submitted: July 27, 2011

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Content

Submitted: July 27, 2011

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Thoughts are empty and words have vanished,

my body was left behind; my sanity banished.

I held onto it for so long before I realized it was all a waste,

trying to indulge in their sweet taste.

What is love without it's consiquences,

what is a warning without pretences?

I see my life as it, wasted among those who are stonger,

for those whos lives are more valuable and who deserve to live longer.

I am a soul without a course, a desire to breath with no force.

Could life be as cruel as it has amied to be?

Status: Finished

Genre: Poetry

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shravani

Comment | 29 words

Wed, July 27th, 2011 1:48am

wow...its so deep....i gives me the illusion that sombody has really hurt u a lot....or is it so???
nyways....nice work...waiting for your next one...

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Comment | 28 words

Wed, July 27th, 2011 1:55am

Thanks so much, it means alot. Haha, well not truely, I'm just able to think of how it would feel, but thank you so much for your feedback!

GhostWalker

Comment | 34 words

Wed, August 24th, 2011 11:28pm

wow.that was amazing.nothing compared to mines.:D it left me like speechlees and part of the is because i can realte to it:( but anywho it was amazing i loved it:D

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Comment | 21 words

Wed, August 24th, 2011 11:34pm

aww, thanks. Haha, im so glad! And no, we all have our own writing techniques. I'm glad you enjoyed it :o]