The Undefined

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

This story is loosley based on Slenderman and a girl trying to find out what is happening to her.

Chapter One:A scary thought

It was late when she arrived back to her hotel,room 432 to be exact.She parked her brand new KIA in a parking lot right next to the "Del Plaza" hotel.
As she was going to her room,a tall man in a black suit bumped into her and without apologizing walked away.
She entered her room locked the door and went to the kitchen.
She ate a sandwich and unexplainably hit her head on the counter as she fell asleep only to be awaken by neighbours next door with strong headache and no memory at all

I'm sorry if i made vocabulary mistakes,english is not my mother language.

Just tell me what you think.

Is it a good start?

I plan on writing 20 chapters


Submitted: November 10, 2013

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