When i wrote this i felt constrained, this is what it is about too me.

Although reading it you may feel as if it has a different meaning to you :)

i'd like to hear your thoughts.

Lost
 
Imprisoned in the morning mist,
thoughts clouding my vision,
chains binding my beliefs-
and I drift away on a stormy sea.
 
Forcing me where I don’t want too go,
a prisoner, trapped.
And I lose my mind beneath-
the depths of the ocean.
 
In a far away place,
Longing to be released and unchained,
surrounded by desolation,
my judgement and senses adrift.
 
Rain fighting.
caught in a battle that can’t be won,
hurtling towards a lifelong darkness,
my soul is buried. A sunken ship.


Submitted: October 07, 2008

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Itsuwari

To me, it is a metaphor for life. Or, more specifically, the process of growing up. When imagination is replaced by restraints. I could go deeper into it, but I fear I would bore you. Suffice to say, another brilliant piece. I truly enjoyed reading and analyzing this piece.

Tue, October 7th, 2008 7:41pm

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Don't worry i doubt you could bore me, i'm just scared of boring people with my poems.

Thanks for the comments :)

Tue, October 7th, 2008 12:44pm

Twisted Illusion

very well written! so many can relate to this!! a great read !!!

Tue, October 21st, 2008 2:49pm

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Thank youuu :D

Tue, October 21st, 2008 12:42pm

SteelSniper

caught in a battle that can’t be won, - all battles can be won, if theirs just one breath left to fight with.

im not sure how i relate to this poem, i do. but it not a default emotion. i'm like that, i feel and think differently to everyone else. Ive read it three times now ^^

~Reaper,
A Knight of Booksie Old.

Sun, November 2nd, 2008 11:16am

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yeah thats true, at the time i wrote this i felt s if i was drowning in everybodys expectations of me and there was nothing i could do to stop it
Thanks - Fire.

Sun, November 2nd, 2008 3:20am

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