She's everything

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

I'm completely in love with this girl.

Most days feel like a complete blur,


That is until he met her,


During the day he looks up at the sky,


As he tries to figure out why,


At night he’s captivated by the stars,


His heart feels as though it’s behind bars,


It’s too bad there are so few,


Who can make someone as happy as you,



You are someone that is extremely rare,


You make everyone around you genuinely care,


You probably inadvertently break a lot of hearts,


You have made mine into pieces and parts,


You see you’re the type that brings a smile,


You have something that could never be written on file,



Whatever it is those blessed enough to be apart of your life,


Will see your love even through times of strife,


This world has never seen such beauty and love,


Simply put you’re an angel sent from above,



I wish you the best in everything you try,


This poem was written by a guy,


Who felt like most days were a complete blur,


That is until he met her.

Submitted: April 07, 2011

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nice work.

i'd really appreciate it if you took some time to check out a few of my pieces

Thu, April 7th, 2011 6:37am

Frank Ramtahal

I like the manner in which you expressed the love of the person in the poem for that girl. The centre display also looks great. I vote I Like It for you.

Thu, April 7th, 2011 7:36am


Thanks that means alot. I'm a Hockey player and have never even given a thought to writing a poem until I couldn't sleep thinking of this girl the other night. It was wierd because I just started typing and then 10 minutes later my word document turned into this poem. Do you think I should give it to her? Or is the wording a little dull?

Thu, April 7th, 2011 2:28am

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