She doesn't understand

Poem by: TheHorizonBetweenUs

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Someone wrote this beautiful poem for me. She thinks that it doesn't make much sense but to me it does. She is one of those few people who care and I'm grateful. Lucky to have her in my life. And thank you for reading.

Talks about the dead

I'll tell her, life has four letters too.

She doesn't understand

wants to descend into the darkness

Okay,so, isn't there the moon?

She doesn't understand

I know that there are people who hate

but aren't there people like me who love?

Hate has four letters you know;

but so does love.

Cry has three letters, but you know;

so does joy.

And love, I know it doesn't make much sense

but have you noticed,

your name have six letters

and so does mine.

I'm sorry it doesn't rhyme,

But I hope you understand.

-x-

Submitted: March 28, 2015

Non-Fiction love dark sad friend heartbroken notmypoem

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Da-emise

Hey..you seriously liked this ?? I'm glad. :)
*Nerissa's tone* good words put together are better if followed..love ya :)

Sat, March 28th, 2015 10:58am

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Like? I loved this. I know, I know. Thank youuuu. I'll try, babe. x

Sat, March 28th, 2015 4:20am

Josephic

Lols... da twins are back At it again... that's some real good stuff up there. 'Cry has four letters, but you know;
so does joy.' I think you made a mistake there but who cares though, Horizon likes it, I like it and I'm sure da other readers are gonna like it... and Bhavya it does make alotta sense. 'Im sorry it doesn't rhyme,
.' Uhmmm I don't know who Nerissa is but sure seems like fun using her tone so ammo use it 'Whoever told you it doesn't rhyme?' *Nerissa's tone* yay! using Nerissa's tone is kinda fun ^_^ (just playing 'round though)... Awesome stuff up there... thanks for da in vie

Sat, March 28th, 2015 12:00pm

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Twins xD haha. YES I KNOW. I MADE A TYPING ERROR, JEEZ. Thanks for pointing out. I didn't notice that, really. xD And thank you for this cool af comment. x

Sat, March 28th, 2015 5:55am

Alex The shadow girl

Haha wonderful piece. And you two do seem like best friends.

Sat, March 28th, 2015 12:44pm

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Thank you so much, Alex. And yes we are. :) x

Sat, March 28th, 2015 5:54am

natalayaevans

Dam you guys! I wonder why I don't I have people writing poems for me xD Well, you guys are really lucky to be besties. I'm guessing this is written by Bhavya? I'm blown away literally. You made such wonderful observations. Okay so in Scarlet style I would say, "This is exquisite." Another wonderful piece, two amazing people and pure friendship.... I guess it won't get better than this. Or maybe it would ;)

Sat, March 28th, 2015 3:11pm

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Aw, thank you so much,Natalaya. You know my style now, I guess. XD and don't worry you will get a friend like that one day and you'll treasure her/him. :)

Sat, March 28th, 2015 11:45pm

Smiley113

You're so lucky a person that someone ( which I guess is Bhavya ) wrote this lovely poem for you... I just love this one!

Tue, March 31st, 2015 1:29am

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Yes, I am. And thank you so much. x

Tue, March 31st, 2015 8:40am

Sahar Ahmad

You are so lucky to have a friend, who remembers that whatever happens, her friend should smile and keep going. Friend is having 6 letters and so does beauty. Friendship is the beauty two people share. This poem shows how close you two are. Great job by her!

Tue, March 31st, 2015 2:20pm

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Oh yes, I'm very lucky and I love her. Thank you so much for this lovely comment, Sahar. x

Tue, March 31st, 2015 8:40am

PoeticMe♥

Awe, this truly beyond beautiful. I once had someone write me a poem, sure it wasn't a masterpiece in the eyes of a poet master, but it was flawless to me :). Seriously, I loved "Cry has three letters, but so does joy" Please tell your friend that this poem is truly touching, and just simply beautiful :). ~Poetic

Wed, April 1st, 2015 11:19pm

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Aw, thank you so much and yes this might not be the best poem according to some poet master but this is the best for me. Thanks, again. x

Thu, April 2nd, 2015 1:59am