Falling Awake

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I actually wrote this after speaking to a very drunk man at a liquor store. And his views on death and the world weren't quite normal.

Eternal slumber, a final sleep.

No heaven above, no family weeps. 
This is death, it's truest form, forfeit life.

Return to earth in which you were born.

No residing anger a black abyss, fallen from torment. This is bliss


Submitted: August 22, 2013

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FrootLoop246

Wow. Was that the drunk guy's POV on death and life?? I'll be honest. A drunk guy CAN be fun to talk to. Or FUNNY, that is. Especially the alcholic kind. My old job was a fast food restaurant on the edge of a not-so-safe neighborhood, so our "customers" tended to be quite inebreated. But they weren't mean drunks. They were singing, dancing funny drunks! :D

Fri, August 23rd, 2013 9:09pm

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Lol it was it was an interesting conversation to say the least, but the guy was very friendly.

Fri, August 23rd, 2013 9:51pm

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