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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
okay so below is the poem. idk what rhymes with Allie for the last line. i like the reference to The Notebook because she likes that movie, but idk what rhymes with Allie that will fit...so if it has to go i guess i'll have to deal with it. and also, the second, third, and fifth stanzas are a little iffy to me. so yeah, just edit, criticize, and help me with that line! thanks love you all

Submitted: August 09, 2012

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Submitted: August 09, 2012

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There's something about you
That feels just right
Makes me want to hold you
Close and tight

You make my heart melt
And my mind soar
My tummy flutter
my hearts cure

Perfectly imperfect
Is all I can see
That cute nose twitch
Weakens my knees

Your smile, pure beauty
Illuminates the room
Outshines the sun
And flowers post-bloom

Everything I want
And everything I need
Will there ever be another
Who'll make my heart speed?

I'll be your Noah
And you'll be my Allie
Forever, my princess
Forever, your ________


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