The Life of Canon

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

in short, a girl did me wrong and hurt me. I wrote it just before we broke up because I thought I was hurt.. But.. then we broke up and now.. Let's just say being single feels good.

Canon... life is like Canon by Pachelbel... It starts our slow... And calm... Everything easy going and smoothly flowing... But with each passing day... Every passing event... Every tear shed... Every scar made... Every verse!... Life quickes with th pace of things... Becomes stronger with the weight and the pain of it all... It becomes more furiouse with every passing verse and day... Each one like the last... And the man who suffers from it all begins to wonder if it will ever end...  And just as he thinks it couldn't get any worse... The musician takes the one person he holds dearest and turns her against him... And his life... His song... reaches it's most devestating... most furiouse peek... And he can not take it!... He takes the musician's wand... The sharpest knife... And drives it through his very own heart! Oh the horror! What mad musician one man must be to make another man so innocent hungry for his own blood?! How cold hearted must one woman be to make one man so angry and upset that he would degrade himself to do what no man must do and weep before his friends and family?! What kind of monster must he become to get the respect and love that he has worked so hard desserve?! I have seen what kind of monster he becomes!...  I too have seen seen the wickedness of a heartless wrech who had turned her back against him!... I too have heard the cursed song that has doomed the man to a fate he can not escape!... Destined to die at his own hands... I have seen the suffering he has been through... I have lived through his pain... I have cried his tears... And I have felt the cold blade of his knife as it drove through my very own chest and peirce into my heart... And now I know not what happiness is... All I know is pain... Regret... Hatred... Sorrow... All hope is lost... My will to go on is lost in the winds... And just like the song... Everything fades to Nothing...


Submitted: October 19, 2013

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Crimson Star Locket

My heart recently stop of how blown away this was, your right we all wonder how you can feel so much rage of just one person, right after they crumble your own heart. but after a while you feel absolutely nothing and kind of good at the same time. So anyway, this was really good and I was wondering if you wouldn't mind checking out some of my writing. But overall this was very good :}

Sat, October 19th, 2013 7:52pm

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Thank you. I would love to read some of your stuff.

Thu, October 24th, 2013 6:08am

smircle

It's funny how feelings can change so easily. It's our thoughts that we should fear most; we seem to usually make things worse than they actually are, for whatever reason. You can really feel the pain and hurt in the words; the punctuation- especially the exclamation marks- brought about an abrupt stop, really stood out to the reader, especially those with question marks, too; as though they're asking the reader a question. Good imagery and I like the metaphor of the song. Really good job; keep writing!:)

Mon, December 23rd, 2013 9:22pm

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thank you ^_^

Fri, January 3rd, 2014 6:18am