We As One

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is written about the one person in life who is my other half. without her i am incomplete. There is nothing we can hide from eachother, for we both know what each is thinking and feeling.. But like all happy endings, they dont exist. We will not be together.

The moment of impact is like an explosion igniting inside my mind. All things tangent cease to exist as time slips into a continuum of different realities, all visible, all involving you. In the time it takes to release a breath, a whole lifetime is revealed. The taste of the sweet nectar conveying from your lips to mine is a paralyzing agent that leaves me to bid your will. The touch of your hands is enough to cripple the very being of who I am. Our in sync hearts beat unlike any harmonious love story yet told. Our mind, body, and souls connected in a way no insignificant human mind and emotion could ever explain or comprehend.  With you I am full of life, vibrant, and complete. Without you there is nothing but a shell walking the sands of life, empty. A story such as this should have but one ending. But as all things in life, such stories do not have the expected conclusions. You will always be me, as I you. No matter the distance or time that will pass.


Submitted: June 18, 2014

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ShakeilKanish

WOW.....this is WOW lmao can I steal some of your amazing quotes for my love stories? I mean dear God where do you come up with stuff like this? Taste of sweet nectar on your lips is like a paralyzing agent to me? Forget the fact that for a second I pictured the other person as some dangerous kind of reptile that was amazing! In the time it takes to release a breath the universe is revealed? That just shows how powerful this love actually is, they two of them combined and entwined is opening their minds to everything, everything that either one of them could ever want to know is there with each other. Every breath they take they unleash another amazing experience together thats just wow....Then that part about them always being together no matter the distance or the time that passes that's just real love right there! I mean God imagine saying that to someone no matter what the love will be real that's just deep right there! I could go on about this poem forever but then I wouldn't be able to say that it made me Speechless! From the opening of this poem to finish it was just so quotable and so amazing you really are an amazing writer!! I'm def going to fan you! ha not really fan you like with a leaf but like....you know what I mean....

Wed, June 18th, 2014 5:31pm

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Lol.. Thank you again.. I would love to tell you the story behind it.

Wed, June 18th, 2014 12:15pm

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