Oaring in the Earth's Oasis

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this is all about how the poem maker looked about life...and i think this is how we must view life too! :)

Thanks for reading! :)

Oh, blue sky let thy children;

explore and fly.

Thenceforth thy green

meadow we will enjoy.

While thy eyes watch

in the midst of a bliss moment.

Whiffle thy cold wind

so we may know thee presence.


As i watch the horizon,

thy horary I forsook.

Your children behave's

as nostalgia doesn't exist.

For thy moment is a gift and so

we will never drift.

The smiles and laughter we begot,

not in thy wheyface.


For thy beauty is flexible,

it's a resemblance of earth's wild breeze.

Only magnificent and pleasing view

thy mouth could read.

Merely because of you,

awakening malice will be a few.

Before thy poem end, hereby I say

thee love will never bend.


Submitted: November 18, 2011

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Wow. Mate this is awesome! It has a good flow and I like what I see when I read this. Thank you so much for posting it.

Fri, November 18th, 2011 1:29pm


and thank you so much for reading! :)

Sun, November 20th, 2011 7:35pm


That end gave me a smile. I enjoyed the flow and feel this had to it, it was beautiful. And I think it's great what it's saying.

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