Poem by: theredrockpetra
Submitted: May 27, 2012
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is that it??
i want more to it
Yeah, its supposed to be short! glad you liked it!
14/17 th of a haiku, but who cares ?.....its very sweet
thanks! haikus always confuse me and wikipedia said haikus in english aren't as strictly syllabically based as the japanese, they said 14 was average so i aimed for that! could make it 17, it was actually longer and a short poem but i wanted to write a haiku so i did what i could!
I thought the rule was
Five syllables, then seven
Then five. Am I wrong?
Not that it matters
I like what you have written
As I always do
yeah, i really am no expert on haikus, but i'm happy you liked it! Thanks for continuing to read my work, i'll have more up soon!
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