The unnatural./

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Booksie Classic
Hi this a raw introduction to my story. I know it's really short. What I am looking for is criticism. Is it a good hook?

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The unnatural./

Submitted: July 09, 2012

Hi this a raw introduction to my story. I know it's really short. What I am looking for is criticism. Is it a good hook? Read Chapter