I was in school and i wrote this tell me what you think

The lights I see

Are comming toward me

All the sudden I feel a pain in my thigh

I feel myself going sky high

I hit something cold and wet

I realize the fate that I've met

Crimson red all over the street

Then another blinding light I meet

Now everything is nice and calm

I hold a rose in my palm

I think I'm dead,I'm surrounded by white

When I was walking around at night

I open my eyes to a room

And hear a docter say "Here she meets her doom............."


Submitted: June 26, 2008

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Itsuwari

... That was certainly... interesting.

Sat, January 3rd, 2009 5:04pm

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..hey it was one of the first poems i wrote and i was in a bad mood that day

Sat, January 3rd, 2009 9:41am

Dead nothingness

Nice poem! :)

Sun, February 15th, 2009 12:37pm

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thanks

Sun, February 15th, 2009 7:41am

MissGC

you have a talent you used such great words, good job

Sun, March 7th, 2010 7:06am

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thanks

Sun, March 7th, 2010 9:12am

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