We had to do a poem of something that happened in our life I came up with this and I think it's really good

in a doctors office  you can imagine my thrill

waiting for the doctor gives me a chill

the door opens a crack

 my memories go black

he starts to talk at amazing pace

i wish i had a can of mace

one word catches my ear

a horrible image does appear

an operating table with tones of knives

at thought I'm breaking into hives

at least a week of sleepless nights

waking up to bright lights

I'd rather face a burgerly

than have to face surgery

Submitted: June 26, 2008

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I'm not sure if this was intended to be funny, but I find myself laughing. Even if it wasn't, I enjoyed it and that's what matters.

Sat, January 3rd, 2009 5:07pm


i had to do a poem about something that happened in my life last year for school...eh...so i guess thinking of my doctor i wanted people to get a laugh out of it.

Sat, January 3rd, 2009 9:39am


This is amazing. I am having surgery in 3 days.
Great luck!!!!
God bless you all

Sun, May 3rd, 2009 5:01am



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