Its about a man who has lost his loved one and wished that that he could pass away just to see her face one more time

A rainy day is ever so quiet
to make us simply drift asleep,
as our heads touch a pillow of sorrow
the puddles gather to wash them away

as we slumber to the sound
we dream of wonderous things
a world were there are no troubles
A world that we wish to be,

And though once we wake
we will find ourself lost
amongst the rain and sorrow
Not to see the world that was

If only it could rain forever
we would drown away our fear,
Our cares about depression,
the wonders of what is to be

though if this river wash me away
Weary not I wont,
I shall float till the sound of tomorrow
to were I awake to the morn

And my eyes shall peel open
and break back this tide
Alone in my bed I will awake
For this body knows no warmth,

Alone in my sorrows
shall I forever trimple
and under this brooke I shiver
since the day you left my side

If only it could rain forever
and this vessle send a float
Against the tides of dawn
across this life into the new,

To once meet your face with out slumper
Is the day I wish to see
to bath in these waters
and was away this world departing you and me

Submitted: February 10, 2011

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Graeme Montrose

you took me on a trip there into your words, i could imagine and see it, wonderful!

Sun, February 13th, 2011 1:04am


thank you, this is one of my favorites I wrote a few days back

Sat, February 12th, 2011 5:30pm


if "only" it could rain forever. I am in love with your writing. The words are mesmerizing.

Sun, February 13th, 2011 8:09am


Thank you, I like to use words and lines that simply make the reader see.

Sun, February 13th, 2011 2:21am


I love this poem, very nice, perfect word choice.

Sun, February 13th, 2011 9:18am


Thank you very much.

Sun, February 13th, 2011 2:22am


"Rain forever... so tears cannot be seen... rain forever... so it will melt away the mask of me..." -Jez

Fri, February 18th, 2011 10:03am

Burning Pen

Another Good One Bru .

Tue, June 21st, 2011 8:53am

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