Marked For Review

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Aliens Come To A World And Mark It For Review

Submitted: April 30, 2015

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The two aliens in the ship were hovering over a blue planet with a little green and orange it was mostly water but the most interesting thing there were the things that inhabited it they had picked up a primitive device that had some messages and a golden record with recordings of what were called humans from the recording they had expected something more along the lines of peaceful but when they sent probes down they found violence everywhere wars over resources that would eventually destroy this beautiful planet there were fights at the most basic level and even violence over the color of their skin but this was the most intelligent species on the planet had decided to use it to kill each other on all of their journeys the aliens had never seen a species so infatuated with violence. But there were some redeeming individuals among them that were intelligent enough to understand that they needed to conserve the planet and not destroy it with pointless wars they had analyzed all of the communications between the continents and figured out they were called scientists and they worked to understand the mysteries of their planet there were also people called doctors to work to heal other members of their race but even with the redeeming factors they decided that they should come back in a few hundred years and see if they have matured any if it isn’t just a smoking pile of ash by then. So the aliens marked the planet for further review and went on their way.


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